The Empress's Thousand-Layered Schemes

At present, the novel is about a yandere empress raising fish, setting the ceiling in the early stage, and then writing a long-term development story. The author has his own writing style, the logic is smooth, and the story is quite good. The empress, to be honest, this yandere character is not strong enough. The first part was because the male protagonist looked like a crazy critic, but the more the empress is written about, the more reasonable she seems to be. In this case, sometimes the yandere is not allowed to enter. (To be yandere, she has to focus on being coquettish, and her characteristic is illness. If the writing is not coquettish enough, the reading will not be cool enough) Male protagonist, to be honest, the story is a love story between the female protagonist and the male protagonist, so don't focus on the path of cultivating immortals and Long Aotian's battle scenes. Instead, describe the various aspects of life and the emotional themes of traveling to express the author's interpretation of love. There are so many characters appearing at once that it's a bit hard to remember. I think we can follow the routine of a unit drama. One unit only focuses on this group of people. This way there will be no confusion and the characters will be easier to understand. Su Jiuyou's character could be a little fuller, but a full-fledged character should not have too many ups and downs in the plot, otherwise it would feel like the author wrote it for the sake of writing. However, I think this novel is a love story between a man and a woman, and suddenly there will be a sense of fragmentation with multiple characters without much foreshadowing. Finally, the imagination is very rich. Come on, author!

Guess (just my own imagination, don't comment if you don't like it): Qin Qingge is Ye Qingyu's clone or part of his soul. Ye Qingyu's relationship with Shi Guang was so bad that it could not be saved. Changing his identity and becoming Qin Qiege, he accompanies Shi Guang, and they re-experience the hardships together and grow together. The relationship that they have endured together becomes deeper and more pure. In the past, Ye Qingyu could always find Shi Guang if he ran away. It was just a matter of time. This time, he stopped chasing Shi Guang. He said that he wanted Shi Guang to grow up on his own, just to create the conditions for Shi Guang and Qin Qiege to live together and develop feelings for each other. Original text evidence (the middle paragraph of Chapter 11, you can go to Chapter 11 to find it yourself): Shi Guang made a mental note. The angle of the bulging cheeks, the everted curvature of the lower lip, and the fullness of the cheeks are more than 70% overlapped with Xiaoqing's expression when she is angry. A creation of Ye Qingyu's law, and a weapon refiner who practices "Si Guang Jue". Two unrelated creatures, the curvature of their gills is exactly the same. Not normal. But I can't figure it out for the moment. Archive.

It's a very interesting novel. Although it is too far from reality, it is quite interesting after accepting the yandere setting of the heroine. Is this the joy of peek-a-boo? The emotional description is also quite good, without too much sense of dissonance. Although the logic serves the main line, it is also reasonable and quite interesting. Recommend

The story continues smoothly, and there is nothing unacceptable. The portrayal of the yandere is just what I like. So far, I still like this book very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Why did it stop updating? It's very good. I suggest the author read the readers' comments and stick to his own ideas and outline.

Is this enough for who to watch? It makes foreigners think that we can't afford to update! Give me an update! One hundred updates a day! [Anger]

It's well written, the writing is good, and the plot is interesting. It's not a bad street routine.

Will Qin Qiege be the heroine?

Okay, okay, I can see it a little bit.

It's okay, I just watched the plot after No Escape, the male protagonist accepted it, I read it as a sweet story. I hope to write more sweet stories about Shi Guang and Qing Yu, [shocked]

Very nice, I like it very much It's very beautiful, I don't know why so few people see it.