Tomb Raiding: Vast Desert, A Lone Goose Returns Late

Not bad. Ayan is an assassin with incredible strength, reliable, smart, calm and rational. Her smooth muscle lines give her a special sense of security and charm. With absolute strength, all other people's calculations are like children's play house. Reliability is a matter of taste. Just curious. Are the women in her world different from other worlds? They are born weak. Although there are indeed gender differences in other worlds, they all have advantages and cannot be divided simply by strength. Maybe it has something to do with their social environment? The girls in them basically feel like reproductive tools and toys. The environment has a great impact on people. I also hope that some details of the article can be optimized. For example, if a male character is beautiful but not feminine, I have actually seen that kind of writing in many female videos. I still think it is a bit too labelling. Femininity is various and cannot be used as a single adjective. Moreover, the word "que" is used in the expression to turn, giving people the feeling that if a male character is effeminate, he will be finished. It seems that femininity is not a good word. I am accustomed to being more alert when watching female videos. I also hope that the details of female videos can be optimized better and better, and there will be less and less stereotypes in the details of the text, so that the text can progress with the times. I was stunned when I saw the permanent pause. I clicked on it and was silent for a long time. I was deeply impressed by this book because it is a rare novel about a strong woman in the same genre. A Yan is calm, rational, and powerful, but it conforms to all childhood fantasies about knight-errants. A red dress in the desert seems to always be so strong, firm, and free and easy, which constitutes the clearest impression of her. I can feel the author's love for A Yan, which outlines her free and easy and unruly soul. A few months ago, I was still making suggestions and discussing. Readers' suggestions were heard and adopted... I was really happy at that time, because it is normal for readers' suggestions not to be heard, so I was very impressed. I also discussed the situation of girls in Ayan's world. The wind brought by the strong woman running wiped away the tears of her girls, and Ayan, who held up the sky for them, was very charming... So when I read the latest chapter, my computer crashed. It was like a conversational friend who communicated through text and happily discussed topics of interest. The next second she flew away. It was so trance-like. There are many emotions that cannot be analyzed, but I can't describe the feeling. But the free and easy red color in the desert should stay in my memory forever. Ayan will stay in my memory for a long time. Very good story. Wishing you happiness, wishing the free soul to be the freest bird, wishing you a good night.

Beautiful story about strong women! Yan Guichi's story remains to be continued, I hope she is well. The author wishes that you and your daughter can meet in another world. May your next life be safe, joyful, healthy, and happy every day. Good night, the author ˃̵˄⦁˕ ⦁𐙚˂̵

I feel sad for the author and sorry for the story. In the past days when I was following updates, I always felt that the story was very good and the author was a treasure. Unexpectedly, the final ending is that the story comes to an abrupt end with the author. I have been moved by the author's words and happy with the author's stories. I am grateful for this encounter. I hope that in a world that is no longer described, the author can enjoy freedom, carefreeness, and carefreeness with the heroine he loves so much like her. I would like to write this review to commemorate my fate of meeting the author and the stories in her heart. Goodbye

I don't know why no one commented, maybe because it's only chapter 40. I will be the first person to evaluate it. The author was also unlucky to meet me. As soon as I had a sense of responsibility, I would read the article with a microscope. But then again, if I only typed "In fact, it is generally smooth, and it is quite enjoyable to watch. The heroine is a very chic and lively heroine, and you can continue to watch it." Other readers may not believe me, and they will think that I am a troll. First of all, I have to say that it is very well written. You can see it. I quite like the heroine. Lucky for those who suffer from charlatanism, the heroine is quite heroic. Overall relaxed and active. By Chapter 10, I saw that the heroine was a bit sultry. Then I realized that the author is actually a bit boring, and the description of the writing is sometimes a bit off-line. There should be no need to worry about the heroine being wronged. It can be seen that the author still likes the heroine. The author has dreams of being a hero, and the heroine is a hero, so can he abuse the heroine? Bao is reluctant to part with it. (Unless the author is the kind of person who likes beautiful, strong and miserable protagonists, but to me, this cannot be said to be abusing the protagonist, it is a chuunibyou) The author probably will not make the heroine suffer emotionally, at least he does not have this tendency at the moment. Before the tenth chapter, the heroine has revealed her identity as a peerless master to everyone in the team. The heroine believes that she can deal with others, even if this is a brand new world. People are so magnanimous. We young knights are so conceited that they are the best in the world. The experience of the cold weapon era allows the heroine to directly confirm that these people are no threat. Although the heroine will not give them a chance even with hot weapons, it is a bit confusing to think that the opponent is not threatening without confirming the opponent's trump card. But Leng Tou Qing belongs to the cuteness of a hero to me. This is how our heroine walks around the world openly and can bulldoze all the way with the help of force # Such girls have no intentions # Later, I became even more convinced that the heroine is actually quite young at heart and can act cool, which is very cute. Practicing peerless martial arts without looking cool is like walking in fine clothes at night, can you win? The emotional part contains a lot of psychological description. This mainly depends on reader preference. In the past, I've seen dramas where the description of the relationship is greater than the plot. They were usually dark dramas and I couldn't watch them, but the statistics were not bad either. My evaluation of this kind of city is gorgeous. Then I won't eat this one anymore. How can I evaluate this kind of food? Not much to say. Some people may say, eh, eh, how can Sha Haixie have a crush on the heroine so easily? Family members, Wu Xie is good at this. The reason why Sha Hai looks so defensive is because he is afraid that the Wang family will be on the other side. I think it doesn't matter to him whether he has a favorable impression after confirming that the other person is not a member of the Wang family. The two of them are very professional counterparts to each other. The description of facial expressions sometimes feels overdone (especially the frequent descriptions of eye color, which although it can reflect the coldness of the heroine, is a bit boring), but I actually think the description of appearance is pretty good most of the time. I'm someone who gets tired of describing a character's appearance for more than three lines at a time, but this time it felt pretty good. Maybe it's because I like this kind of description: I don't pay much attention to the description of the face, and would rather show the sharp lines and muscles with explosive power, and show the character's heroic appearance. But it's also possible that I had a preference beforehand and liked heroic characters, so I liked them unconsciously. But this kind of appearance description really makes the heroine very powerful, and I feel very comfortable with it.

This book is really good to read, and the character Yan Guichi is portrayed very well. But when I saw the news of the author's death at the end, I was really sad and regretful. I cried all the time when I saw the news😭😭😭, and even wrote a short essay to post on WeChat Moments. Good night author 😭😭😭 I will always remember you

I want to give it four stars because you don't know how to write emotional scenes. Everyone's feelings are inexplicable. I didn't even see that Wu Xie likes the heroine. The heroine doesn't like anyone. The relationship with the female character is also very inexplicable. It jumps suddenly. Now that we can go to nightclubs hand in hand, I also see little Ayue. The reason why Ayue can continue to have a relationship with them is because her relationship was broken and reorganized. Before that, she only admired Wu You's appearance. She never let go of her guard against being a secret guard easily. In contrast, the killer heroine never had any defense, and this story did not change the ending of anyone except Wang Can. (This is my problem. I read fanfics hoping to change something. This story starts from the sea of sand, which is at least good for Yali. A little bit, the Sand Triangle has not changed. This is my problem. I did not ask the heroine to become a nanny, but at least give me a little help). I read that it is a fanfic of Little Ah Yue, so I have high expectations, but apart from the setting of the same internal strength as Little Ah Yue, it has nothing to do with it. You can add your own plot. Since she is the same existence, there is no need to rigidly follow the original plot and add changes. Only then will the fanfic be meaningful. I shouldn't scold the cook after eating, and I can't write myself. I just like to read it. I read it with high expectations, because the book "Little A Yue" is really good, but this one made me a little disappointed.

This is beautiful Although the update has been completely interrupted due to some things, the teacher will silently accompany us in another form. A heroine with a sense of the world. I have been looking forward to the teacher's update, but I got bad news. . . The teacher is with her daughter

I just read a few chapters and couldn't help but comment. Super invincible and beautiful! ! I've read all the tomb robber fandoms, and finally found one where a strong female character is all in. It is still my favorite martial arts setting [Send Heart], and the writing style is also good, not too OOC. It was so cool to read this book when I was in a book shortage [laughs] I caught up on the latest one, it looks great! !

Good night, Huya. I just saw your Tomb Raider fan novel today. I was thinking that I would finally find gold again. When I finished reading it in one go, I found that you announced that you would permanently stop updating the latest chapter. It turns out that you are leaving. Have a good trip (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)

It was very well written. I regret not seeing the end of this book.