I Transmigrated Into The Grave Robbers' Chronicles and Became the Little Dragon Maiden

The plot of your Qixing Lu Palace is wrong. Master Hua'er and Heixiazi did not appear. In the original plot, Da Kui appeared in it, but what you wrote is quite good. You can change it. Don't deviate too much from the original. I just wrote a few tomb robbing notes, but I don't like them anymore.

If the heroine is so interested in other people's affairs, she should just tell her. It's also "I'm afraid of being discovered rashly, and I'm afraid of getting myself into trouble." In this way, no matter what, I have to keep up with the protagonist group. The described psychological state is so lofty. If you want to describe the female protagonist as a bodyguard, you should clearly write "I feel sorry for these protagonists." Writing this way gives people the feeling that "Wu Sansheng is ignorant and suspicious. I am good for your nephew and other protagonists. I think about you, but I can't say it directly. I can only accompany you to help you." Writing this way gives people the feeling that without the female protagonist, the protagonist group will be destroyed.