Huangpu: Who Put an Ally in My Unit?

Author, you need to work harder! Don't just shove that little poisoned broth in without even reading it properly! You're ignoring the details and making it readable, but if you look closely, you'll find the bellows have become a sieve. Wake up, author! Write properly and don't ruin it! The masses are waiting for your masterpiece. Keep it up, author!

Liu Zhennian next door has already become the chairman of Shandong Province 🤦🤦

Okay, but something feels off. The civil war later on kills all the capable, anti-Japanese generals from the ragtag army. I don't know why, but the protagonist's army is indeed quite strong, and they were very effective against the Northwest Army. The history is correct, but it just doesn't feel right.

This is a good article about the National Revolutionary Army's resistance against Japan. It doesn't excessively criticize either side and portrays the hardships the National Revolutionary Army endured during the war.

The cheat code is already activated. Why worry about anything else? The writing is quite good, but the cheat code isn't explicitly stated. Like I said, the cheat code is already activated, so don't worry about it. Especially in system novels, the system needs to be made more obvious. Keep it up, author!

It looks great, keep it up! There are a few minor issues, but they're nothing serious.

Overall it's alright, but some parts are completely nonsensical; one minute it says four cannons, the next it's 15.

Finally, someone wrote about the Nationalist Army! Long live China! 666... ​​This made my blood boil!

The last few pictures are hilarious! They really tried to flatter someone but ended up making a fool of themselves! 🤦🤦🤦

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