Terrifying National Destiny: The Two Heroines

It's pretty good, but there's one minor flaw: could you lengthen Lin Huai's character? She's a bit too weak. Compared to the other female lead, I prefer the one who climbs the wall. Also, Lin Huai's unique traits weren't particularly highlighted. Overall, it's still quite good. I hope the later levels will be a bit scarier, but with the photos, it shouldn't be too difficult.

I came across this book from the author's previous work, and it's considered one of the best among side-scrolling novels. While the protagonist has a cheat-like advantage, he's also quite strong and not mindless. The world-building is clear, and the characters are well-developed, making it a worthwhile read.

Why are so few people reading such a delicious story...? Our Lin Huai has a genuinely wicked and mysterious girlfriend, Li Yu, who dotes on him rotten, and he also wipes out the bad guys without hesitation. The main characters are both intelligent, and the plot is quite good. I hope the two of them can grow together!

It was great, but the ending was too abrupt; I didn't get enough! 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 Author, please give us some more to say!

I really liked the premise, but the ending felt rushed, which was a bit of a shame. It was still great though, and the stylistic differences between the different story arcs were quite distinct. The infinite flow of American Horror Story was refreshing, and I was really looking forward to the sequel when I suddenly realized it was over. What a regret!

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It's good. When Lin was feeling down, he thought of his wife, and then the two little ones got together. I want to see them eat! 😋

Could you give Lin Huai a little more intelligence? I like relationships where both partners are evenly matched.

The plot is well-paced and engaging, with a compelling storyline. The two female leads are also very likable. Compared to other similar novels, its only drawback is its short length, leaving readers wanting more. However, I highly recommend it. Many of Tomato's novels are quite long; while some have excellent pacing, others suffer from excessive padding. This one is a good example – short yet with a strong, engaging plot.

It looks great so far, but the female lead definitely needs a buff. However, when I saw the second storyline, I felt that she was gradually getting stronger.