An MC Player Drops into Honkai: Star Rail

Overall, there are a lot of poisonous points. The left and right brains are constantly fighting each other. Even if you read it without thinking, it will be a bit uncomfortable. Then there are the good aspects. The subject matter is good, the plot is good, and the writing is also good. Then there is the setting I want to talk about. Logically speaking, Steve is the agent of heaven in the MC world, and the Star God is equivalent to the pinnacle of a certain law. His status is not at the same level. Logically speaking, he will either attract attention when he comes, or he will never attract attention. Then came the ah-ha moment I've been looking forward to. Such a novel person somehow became a star god for a while, but ended up almost never appearing. All in all, you can take a look when there is a shortage of books, but don't have too high expectations.

Very MC, very invincible. Currently, there is a Destruction Star God dead, and it is estimated that the protagonist's consciousness interference will not last long. In short, the protagonist Invincible can create a claim at any time. And MC is not the kind of system swindler. Very pure MC.

It can be seen that the setting is taken seriously, and reasonable explanations are given as much as possible in many places, but the writing can be further improved, come on!

A very thoughtful book, this book organically integrates mechanical power and other Mods with collapsing iron, which is full of fun. In addition, this book uses reasonable methods, such as Mod conflicts and Mod checks and balances that are common in actual games, to avoid sudden acceleration or collapse of the rhythm, while reasonably retaining the protagonist's abilities. The author uses extensive player experience and empathy - "I don't want to cheat, but I reserve the right to cheat", so that this book does not require far-fetched "sudden outbreaks" and other deliberate plots. The main shortcoming of the article is that it contains some minor oversights. Readers who require a certain degree of depth in related aspects may be particularly sensitive to these contents. I was not familiar with the part about collapsing iron, so I skipped it. Some settings regarding MC are clearly pointed out and reasonably customized, such as changes to frequently loaded blocks, rendering ranges, generation mechanisms, etc. However, there are some errors in existing settings. The use of some units and terms is inaccurate and wrong, for example: comparing and calculating su as an energy unit - the definition of su (Stress Units) in mechanical power is: "Stress unit. The power capacity or load capacity produced by a single dynamic block on the network." That is, the load generated by a certain mechanical power block on the power network, if it is on the power source, is the "load capacity". If it is forcibly compared to reality, it should be power, not energy. Misuse of some commands, for example: misuse of commas in the target selector, using commas as "or" instead of "and". If the comma is mistaken for "or" in the actual game, it will cause the game to not function properly. The above usually does not affect the readability of the article. Generally speaking, the flaws do not hide the advantages. Book friends who prefer MC and Bengtie can give it a try. The progress of the plot that everyone is talking about is actually not that important, but in the second half of the book, there is a very big problem with the ending of Yalilo-VI. In a plot that should be important and serious, the author uses a large number of abrupt monologues, trying but failing to truly draw a clear line between what happened when Cocolia was polluted and Cocolia - this is inherently a difficult and controversial issue. Not only does this make the text look pretentious, it also fails to solve the actual problem. A better solution is to make mistakes. Cocolia died in a heroic struggle with the star core under certain circumstances, so it should be consistent with the original work. A good death-writing is definitely no better than a bad resurrection. If you always want to distance yourself from the original work, even letting her retire and pretend to be dead is a good choice. (Although this is the theory, this plot is already far away from the latest chapter, and even patching it is unrealistic... It is a pity that it is rare to see the subject of the original text of the command actually appear)

A very good MC article. This is the first time I have seen an MC protagonist who has full player permissions. He can generate world creation mode commands and load a lot of mods. Is this the sense of security that the Creator God has everything covered? [Laughter] The protagonist is a very pure MC player. The purpose of the protagonist is to play games happily with his friends and save the world. There is no system cheating or any restrictions.

Arriving at Yaliluo in Chapter 114 is a bit slow, at least it's not purely literary. For me, the bad point before Chapter 114 is that I broke Lao Yang's figure while having fun. I think the protagonist can use instructions to repair it or get another one. Thinking about it from another perspective, I am quite angry. I also made due compensation in the follow-up. There is nothing to say. The writing style is quite smooth, with no major ups and downs. Some people say that the author is a brainstormer. I don't feel that way. It should be due to the setting. Anyway, in the main text, it's okay as long as the protagonist doesn't suffer or get upset. Occasionally, he can have some fun.

It's pretty good. It's better than many others.

The pace is a bit slow, but I still write my own story, like an orthodox MC player. MC players can do whatever they want. I don't know how much better than some guys who have high scores but can't write their own stories for a long time. The author is advised to update 10 times a day to make up for the slow pace [laughing][laughing]

To be honest, I don't want to affect the author's thinking, but Cocolia must die. No matter what the reasons are, she must die. First of all, the order to block the lower area was given by her. It is really difficult to repair the contradiction between the upper and lower areas without Cocolia dying. Even if it is restored, why can Cocolia live? Why should the victim forgive the perpetrator? Of course, I am just telling my thoughts.

It's very good. Although I don't like to see the author restricting the protagonist's combat power arbitrarily, this book gives me a different feeling from other books. Although it is restricted, it feels acceptable to me. There is no problem with the character creation of the protagonist. As for the plot, although I don't understand Beng Tie very well, the protagonist's performance is very consistent with his own personality. This is not a problem at all. With the MC, naturally you don't have to follow too many rules and regulations of Beng Tie's original work. After all, this is what makes it interesting. All in all, it's pretty good. To borrow a word from Gojo Satoru, it's "very enjoyable."