My Daughter Fell from the Sky, and My Top-Tier Star Wife Keeps Trying to Seduce Me

Overall, it's a good little sweet article, better than many high-scoring articles. The author's writing style is okay, and both the male and female protagonists stand up well. The only drawback is that the ending is too hasty I don't know if I didn't want to write it because of my grades. I really could have made it longer. In the later period, the relationship between the male and female protagonists progressed very quickly, and then it came to an abrupt end at the end. Although there is an extra chapter to indicate the follow-up, it was quite uncomfortable to hang around emotionally. Oh, but I can understand that the author may not have the motivation to update. Overall, it's worth watching. The author also liked one or two songs. After reading a few more novels with similar themes, I decided to come back to the author ➕1⭐ so that I could at least finish them. I also hope to encourage the author to write longer next time.

It's good-looking, and the characters of the male and female protagonists have been clearly pointed out. It will be better to write more details later. The intimate scenes of the female protagonist are also written directly at the beginning. They have to find a substitute and have the awareness of lightning protection. It is not a big problem to avoid sudden illness and feed the history later in the writing. However, it is also a small problem. The male protagonist is too much like a human machine. When we talk about it later, we can't do this anymore. Oh, and write more about the female goose. It's great and I love it😋

Beautiful, so beautiful. The heroine feels a bit like Tian Xiwei, a sweet girl, an actress, and a female reasoning variety show. I just wasn't satisfied that the male protagonist had to hide it from his parents, which made little Jasmine very sad when her grandma ignored her.

The author is a bit slow in updating, but everything else is great. Little Jasmine is very cute [like][like][like]

The writing is very good, keep the pace, stay tuned [Like][Like][Like]

I first read it from the comic and thought it was pretty good, so I came to read this short story and it was pretty good.

Please update, please update

Not bad, I hope I can keep writing

So warm, little Jasmine is so happy😁

Good-looking, good, good, good So beautiful, love it