Project Moon: I Found a Finger Beauty in the Backstreets

B+ There is no doubt that it is a superior work so far. Ordinary people travel through the city. The integration is very clever. Other masters have already made comments and will not go into details. But we all know that instructions are not a good thing. The little index finger man is just a puppet of instructions. This may become the trigger for the conflict between the protagonist and the heroine (it is doubtful whether the heroine really loves the protagonist) And why does the protagonist's soul come to this powerful body? I'm really looking forward to the foreshadowing that the author hides in it. Is the clueless protagonist assimilated into the city out of fear and becomes part of the cycle, or does he embrace the past and create the future? The last command is zone

The writing is very good, the battle scenes, the psychological description of the characters, and the introduction to the city are all very good, and it also describes the psychological reactions and conditions that will occur when an ordinary person comes to the city.

From my current senses Your rating is A- Plastic objects are rare. They borrow the urban world view but write their own stories. This reminds me of Broken Wing Feather. It is a different feeling from a sensory perspective, but it is equally amazing. As for why it is "-", it is because of the update. Before reading, please note that there are a large number of self-created characters in this book, which are mixed with the author's own opinions, and some special names may appear in the book (I will add them if there is a chance) Final evaluation: If you want to read a borrowed, urban world view, but write your own story, and don't want to read those traditional God of War novels, this book is the best choice.

A+... That's how you rate it, right? The younger brothers and sisters at home all love watching it! As a result, they had to give up the family party just to read the latest issue (heartbreaking). However, with the help of my younger brother, I witnessed the excellence of this novel with my own eyes today! Haha, I almost missed the treasure! We plan to stock up on a few chapters and binge-watch them at family gatherings haha! Tomorrow morning I will go to Amway to help other elder brothers and sisters~ ps: We are willing to provide you with the protection of your family

This Monthly Book fan can be said to be one of the best on Tomato. Although it may have been a bit mediocre at the beginning, I gradually felt that the writing was getting better and better. From the rookie Xiao Zhou who just traveled through time to the solo battle with the ring master, it is clear that Xiao Zhou has become stronger. I hope the author can write better and better in the future! Then I'm actually quite curious, is Xiao Fei still the single heroine now? Or is Xiao Wang also the heroine? After that, does Xiao Fei love Xiao Zhou, an independent personality? Finally, this book is A+! Recommend a look [angry]

! ? Strong ?! A+!! Your love and thinking about the city are unparalleled! This is such an impressive work, it is like a painting full of painstaking efforts. Each character shows his own color, how gorgeous it is in this gray city! Oh, although this is still an unfinished work, I have already seen your shining self-projection through it. I hope you will not be hurt by the negative comments and continue to bloom this wonderful color by creating your own chapter. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

A+! With smooth writing and hearty battles, it's hard to find anyone who can match it in the entire Yueji community. However, the rating is unexpectedly low. I only hope that the author will be unfazed by favors and humiliations, and let his heart blossom. In time, he will be as high as a star. To: Black Feathered Crow------I, the reader, have not seen a battle as exciting as the battle against the Blood Demon for three full minutes. … (The reading time is short because the account has been changed and the offline reading time is long.)

I've been reading for so long and I forgot to rate it, so here's one (there may be spoilers) This book is the best choice among books for newbies in monthly calculations. First of all, as a novel, the language is neither dry nor complicated, and there will be no chance that it will be difficult to read because of the writing style; secondly, the amount of updates, although the updates are irregular, each chapter is large and full. Secondly, back to the work itself, in terms of characters, the male protagonist accidentally came to the city as a modern young man and still had the conscience of a modern person, but he also transformed rapidly under the stimulation of the city. At the same time, I speculate that the male protagonist should be a type of amnesia after a period of time travel. Therefore, the male protagonist's combat power was basically completely sealed at the beginning, and it was unsealed quickly. If you just like to watch Invincible, watch it carefully. At the same time, in the latest chapter, he will be trained hard after passing the master's trial. The heroine is very cute. She is a victim of the ring finger work and is also the representative of the index finger. She has a faint sense of human-machine. Because of her childhood experience, she was separated from the instructions and could not even live a normal life (breathing and the like). At the same time, her lack of emotions will also lead to her ambivalence. She looks forward to further changes. There are also some other original supporting characters who are also very vivid, so I won't elaborate on them here. What follows may contain plot spoilers In terms of the world view, this world is not the world line of Yueji's original work but the mirror world built by the author himself. Currently, some holes have been dug, including the male protagonist's life experience, the anomalies in Hongyuan and the Spider Nest, the disappearing golden branches, the male protagonist's ability to mimicry (this seems to be ego). Breaking away from the original story line means a greater challenge for the author himself, but at the same time the plot will be more exciting. Facing the master's three questions can be regarded as the climax, and the handling of the work is getting better and better. Emotionally, in my personal opinion, the emotional line is a bit fast, but this is not a big problem. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very delicious, the female protagonist's subconscious defense and justification, the male protagonist's questioning of the female protagonist's own will, the two people's conflict after the conflict broke out, and the female protagonist's hesitation and contradiction in the face of unknown feelings are also very delicious (when did the female protagonist make the male protagonist kneel down) Then there are other aspects at the end. The author made his own villain images of the male and female protagonists and some of the supporting characters. There are both Q version and normal ones. They are very nice. As for my personal subjective factors, the author responds very positively to the comments, and also discusses the plot and interacts with the comments, which is very cute😋

Love to watch, love to watch. . . ! I still want to watch it! . . To: The Black Feathered Crow, the agent, insists on updating 10 chapters every day, with each chapter not less than 10,000 words, until the novel is completed. . . . .

(Because the previous one seems to have been swallowed, I will post it again) The entry point is particularly good! The descriptions of the index finger and instructions are also very rich (better than a certain book), but you may feel there are some problems with the rhythm later on (maybe each chapter is too long?). All in all, it is a very good novel. The heroine's role in the next few chapters seems to be significantly reduced, and a lot of space is devoted to the main plot. What does the author plan to write next?