Online Gaming: A Gun That Shatters the Sky

It looks alright, a big improvement over your previous two books. The ratings haven't come out yet, so keep up the good work and update more frequently! People are chasing you, but they're just doing a quest, so they don't hold grudges.

There's no ultimate passion, only passion for the author. This book is also very nicely written, though it's shorter. The author just started writing it, and now, a month or two later, my stomach is already rumbling. I'm very happy about that, okay. Sigh, this is the kind of character I like. No flashy skills, just the simplest, most straightforward attacks. After all, skills have cooldowns, while basic attacks are just that – attacks. Nothing too fancy, and it looks really good.

To be honest, it's much better than most online game novels on the market right now. At least it's relatively realistic. Secondly, I haven't found any trace of AI so far. Even if it's not entirely handcrafted, you can tell the author put a lot of effort into polishing it. The plot seems simple, but it has a kind of "vitality" that AI lacks—a living, breathing life in the characters.

It's alright, but the protagonist gets involved in the power struggles of the major guilds too early. It's only thanks to the author's intervention that the character survives; otherwise, they would definitely be ganged up on and have their account destroyed, since it's not a thief class.

Come look, everyone come look, it's really good! Good things should be shared. 🤮🤮🤮🤮

Overall, it looks pretty good and runs smoothly, but there are a few minor bugs, such as the starting demonized field mouse often being written as a pheasant.

It's obvious it's not AI, but the author forgot about it as they wrote. The agility skill was already level 2 in the first 12 chapters, but then it was written again as level 2 when fighting the bronze-level boss. @LuckyOne

Very good, just don't let it fall apart at the end. This book is a gem on Tomato's platform.

It's so good! Everyone should check it out, you'll regret it if you don't. I'm already hooked! I can't be the only one watching, so come join me! I'm waiting for the next update to see how exciting it gets!

😜It's overly detailed, especially in the combat and skill upgrades. The beginning is like that, a bit mind-consuming; someone who's not very bright might find it tiring to read, like me. Overall, it's a very good quality book; the author really understands games. Support! 🍉