Naruto: Nagato, Lend Me Your Eyes for a Bit

It's decent, but the details are quite good. Firstly, the author has written over 100 chapters, many of which are slice-of-life, with the first 80+ chapters focusing on childhood descriptions. The author's titles and images are excellent, but the excessive slice-of-life descriptions weaken the visual impact.

It's not bad; there's no plot where the protagonist is invincible from the start, or an eight-year-old child suppresses the ninja world. Hurry up and update! Look how lazy you've become!

I'll give the female lead, Xiao Nan, four stars for now, and see how it goes.

Overall, it's pretty good, but there's relatively little focus on the protagonist's combat strength. Although it's constantly said that the protagonist is very strong, most of the action is focused on the other characters. The protagonist rarely gets to fight, or when he does, it's over very quickly. Also, Yahiko's potential is significantly raised.

That's pretty good. I was even thinking of sending the protagonist to Konoha; they have plenty of resources there, he could make some contributions, and with his connection to Jiraiya, he could even try out some forbidden techniques.

The plot is quite good, featuring a single female lead, Konan, and isn't a mindless harem story. It's definitely worth reading. The opening isn't the classic Konoha or Uchiha setup, which is a nice touch. It's much better than most other Naruto fanfictions, which are mostly based on the classic Uchiha/Konoha setups, which have become tiresome.

The perspective is broad enough, and the comprehension is good. However, judging from the reviews, there were many negative ones in the early stages, suggesting a difficult development period. A moderate degree of out-of-character (OOC) to cater to readers might be better, and it's hard to nitpick. Popular elements might be better for breaking into a wider audience, but the comprehension, slow burn, and atmosphere seem somewhat lacking.

I've been following it closely these past few days. Aside from the somewhat confusing training aspects in the early and middle stages, the original work handles the characters' personalities, psychology, and the situation in the ninja world quite well. It gives you a sense of immersion in the characters' desperate efforts to become stronger and become the Akatsuki's strongest support, and then save the day from tragedy.

My friend, keep it up! Your writing is great. Keep striving to discover your talents. You might encounter difficulties along the way, but as long as you believe in yourself, it's a great thing regardless of whether you succeed in the end. Just like Shizuru in the story, despite being born in the humble Land of Rain, he remained steadfast in his desire to make the Land of Rain free from oppression…

It's not that we're too extreme; it's that the ninja world is already incredibly distorted. The power levels completely collapsed later on, and I lost the patience to continue watching.