
Rising Clouds, Sharp Edge
云起锋芒
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Explore more →Any Dual Male-Lead Stories Where It’s Easy to Ship the Wrong Pair?
Are There Any Discipline-Themed Novels?
Looking for Teacher-Disciple Stories With No Romance
Any setting is fine. I just want a no-CP story where the master devotes himself to raising his disciple. I have no idea why you still need a cover image to publish it.
Looking for Discipline Stories Where an Older Brother Spanks Lots of Younger Siblings
Looking for books similar to The Lin Family Troupe. I want a disciplinary story where someone gets beaten in almost every chapter, without an elaborate plot. Ideally, an older brother punishes a younger brother or sister, and one person gets punished along with several others 🙃🙃
School Bullying Stories About Two People Saving Each Other
Looking for books similar to Deskmate, Please Stop Punishing Me. Does anyone know any school stories about mutual salvation, where the boy hits the girl, yet the story is still very sweet? Short dramas or books are both fine. I really need this!!!
I Just Accidentally Deleted My Entire Bookshelf 😱😭😭
Does anyone have any highly rated books to save this poor child? 😭😭
Any Discipline Stories Where Someone Gets Put in Their Place?
Looking for books like Canine Behavior.
A Male Lead Who Constantly Courts Death, Makes the Person He Loves Angry, and Gets Beaten Every Day
Looking for a male lead who likes having the female lead scold him every day.
Any Stories Where the Master Punishes Their Disciple? I’ve Read Almost Everything
I'm looking for books similar to *A Loving Father and a Strict Mentor*.
Strictly Raised Characters, Historical or Modern, Either Is Fine
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Male-Male Romance, Strong Possessiveness, and He Really Does Hit Him
Looking for books like *Sir, I’ll Be Good, Please Don’t Punish Me*.
Looking for Male/Male With Both Affection and Discipline
Looking for books like Shadow Guard, My Lord Knows He Was Wrong, Please Go Easy on the Punishment.
Looking for a Story Where One Is Happy to Hit and the Other Is Happy to Take It. Any Gender
Looking for Brutal Physical Torture Without Emotional Anguish
Looking for books like *Your Majesty, the Shadow Guard Knows His Mistake and Begs for Punishment*. Are there any that are physically brutal but not emotionally angsty? I want something harsh.
Any Pure Master-Disciple Stories That Never Turn Romantic? 🌝🌚🌚🌚
A master-disciple pairing, with their filial devotion staying pure
Looking for a Story with Two Male Leads Who Meet in a Juvenile Detention Center. One Is a Rich Young Master Who Gets Beaten
Looking for Father-Son or Brother Discipline Stories with Strict Family Rules but Plenty of Warmth
I'd like to read something like Marshal's Household Rules.
Teacher-Student Romance 😀
Looking for books like *Falling for My Male Math Teacher*. I want something similar to this.
Male-Male Romance, One Willing to Strike and the Other Willing to Take It, with Strong Possessiveness
Any Master-Disciple Stories with No Romance, Just a Pure Master-Disciple Bond?
Any master-disciple stories with no romance, just a pure master-and-disciple bond? Preferably with a slightly tsundere master.
Any Stories Where a Father Is Especially Strict with His Son? Ideally, He Gets Beaten Whenever He Makes a Mistake
Looking for Brother-Obsessed Novels: The Older Brother Dotes on His Younger Brother, but Disciplines Him When Needed. Please!
Looking for books like *After My Three Older Brothers Were Reborn, I Became the Family Favorite (To the Starry River)*.
Any Books About Setting Rules, Keeping Someone in Line, and Supervising Their Studies?
Looking for Pure Master-and-Disciple Stories! Female Master and Disciple, or Male Master and Disciple
Looking for books like "One Glance from the Aloof Master, and the Disciple Becomes a Perfect Little Angel." No male master with a female disciple, and no female master with a male disciple! I want a purely master-disciple relationship, with no romance!!! Don't recommend anything that doesn't fit, okay?
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I feel that this article is very realistic. Xiaoyun's feelings towards Teacher Sui are real and simple. Maybe because Xiaoyun and I are similar, I can't help but be drawn into it when I read the article. The experiences and exchanges between Xiaoyun and Teacher Sui also inspire me. I admire Xiaoyun's bravery and sincerity, and Teacher Sui's patience, maturity and strict guidance fascinate me. I think the punishment is just right. I really like this kind of article that can bring enlightenment to me [blowing kiss]. There's just one thing I don't understand about the relationship between Teacher Sui and Xiao Huai [what]
It's a really nice book about teachers and students. I feel more educated and guided. Maybe a little tender. The professor is really a good teacher. He turned our low-self-esteem Xiaoyun into the Xiaoyun who can stand alone at the end of the chapter. From then on, Xiaoyun also has the shadow of Jiashu. The moment when the beginning and the end echoed each other, I almost cried [almost cried] Three books. Now that they are all finished, I still feel a little bit reluctant to let go because this is the last one to be finished. Read together with the previous two books, it is a very complete story line. Every different plot has a corresponding place in each book. Reading each book will remind you of the other one, bringing back some memories of reading the other book at that time. I always thought I had reviewed this book, but now it's finished. When I thought about it, I realized that I didn't review it. Yanyan is really good at writing books. The endings of each book are very well written. These three books are very complete. For me, I feel that I have no regrets! [Grass has been planted] Please taste this delicious product! I also look forward to writing a new article after Yanyan has a good rest! The final summary, the beginning echoes the ending: Because you (Yun Tianming) were taught by me (Sui Jiashu), you also have my shadow in you [crying]
No one in the world is an absolutely isolated island. There will always be encounters with people and sunshine on the road of life. College was the starting point for him to change his destiny and the beginning of his pursuit of dreams. Meeting a good teacher on the slow but always moving road was the turning point of his transformation. Let's see that Tianming, with the teacher's company and guidance, crossed the mountains before spring, and found a better self through each experience. Let's see how Teacher Sui balances gentleness and severity, showing the warmth of a teacher despite strict rules. This journey is full of challenges but not lacking in warmth. Let's see how they complete the challenges and complete their self-transformation.
My perspective is very "neutral". Maybe it's because of Brother Huai, but I don't really want to discuss Xiaoyun and Jiashu. (I personally have a grudge against it, and I don't mean it in any derogatory way.) However, there is no doubt that Jiashu is a very good guide. Meeting such a good "teacher" is Xiaoyun's blessing for eight lifetimes. Rather than a teacher-student relationship in college, I think it is more like a "master-apprentice". Jiashu took him through not just a short journey, but a lifelong journey. Xiaoyun's growth can be seen with the naked eye, and he has become cheerful and confident. I wish Xiaoyun good winds and waves in the future, and clouds rising thousands of miles [currently in progress]
The writing in large letters is very beautiful. [I'm full] I can't express it in words (yes, actually, I have nothing to say) [Blow a kiss] While reading the article, I was actually a little angry. If I were Xiaohuai, who cares so much about others even if I am a student, I would be jealous and uncomfortable. It makes sense for Xiaohuai to be jealous, and it is normal for his tone to be unpleasant, but I think the teacher's attitude is It's a little bit bad, it didn't give Xiaohuai a sense of security, and he beat her so hard [Pout] Sometimes Xiaohuai is really wronged [I'm about to cry], so can I torture Teacher Sui again in the later part of the article? (Actually, the last sentence is the key point [I'm full]) This is the first time I have read something other than CP's admonishment to teachers and students. I couldn't stand reading this kind of article before I came across it. I can only say that the writing is so beautiful [making a face] |. •ω•)っ◆ I like you♪
In fact, I wanted to write this book review before, but either something happened or I forgot, so I'm writing it now. The teacher's writing style is still nice This is a purely teacher-student book. In addition to the master-student relationship, the teacher and student also have a master-student relationship. The teacher has his own lover. The biggest and best thing about reading the teacher-student story is watching that child with low self-esteem and timidity move towards a world of his own step by step. Yun Tianming has the same name as him. Tomorrow will be better, and like clouds, they will float to their own world. Everyone is very nice to Xiaoyun, including the professor, Xiaochuan, and most importantly, the aunt. Others say she is crazy, but she is not. What I see in her is bravery, kindness, etc. Auntie stayed for Xiaoyun, she wanted to be better for Xiaoyun. Auntie's life is short. When my aunt died, she was mentally prepared but still cried because she couldn't bear to see someone leave like this. But we all Xiaoyun are also growing. It's over, I have many more thoughts, but I don't know how to express them, so I'll just treat them as random thoughts. Xiaoyun's growth line is very clear. He was two different people at the beginning and now. Along the way, many people accompanied him and helped him. The professor has been teaching him and giving him the best conditions. Being a teacher and a master is already very good. The professor has to deal with his own affairs, but he has always been very good to Xiaoyun. Xiaoyun must live up to expectations and move towards her own future and her own light step by step. Just like his name, Yun Tianming, tomorrow will be better. The road in life is still long. I wish you a bright future.
This book is really good. I read this one after reading the first two books. I rarely read the author's other articles specifically because of the articles, but this book is really worth reading. The author's group portraits are really great and very attractive. Unfortunately, my writing skills are not good and I can't express my feelings. Everyone in the book has his or her own unique personality. The charm makes people want to read on; I am a lover of sweet articles. Although I feel heartbroken when reading some plots, they will become better because of various difficulties. Finally, thank you to the author for writing such a beautiful article. I must not abandon the article and look forward to more excellent articles from the author!
If there must be a mentor on the road of life, this is never my luck, but my honor๑>ᴗO๑ So, I feel honored to meet you (幹bowing) In this enlightened life journey, Xiaoyun met Sui. Those things carved from the bones, being scrutinized and cherished, gradually grew up. Those low self-esteem, internal friction, social fear, and sensitivity have long since transformed into the past and become an insignificant part of the past. If you lack a mentor in your life, then I hope that the teacher's words will not only heal this little cloud, but also you. To youth, to young people, to the young man who is stuck in the same place and doesn't know where to go. To my dear, tomorrow will be better. Meet a better self and have a better tomorrow (ˆつ⩊⊂ˆ)੭: Wandering repeatedly in darkness and light, I know that people should always move forward. In solving this problem of life, there are always endless knots like lilac knots, but I know that the flowers at that moment are very fragrant and beautiful. As we all know, water can carry a boat or capsize it. It is never smooth sailing on the road to growth. Clouds will rain heavily due to accumulated emotions, but eventually the rain will pass and the sky will clear up. May everyone be safe and well, may all your hard work be in vain, may everyone I love be free from illness and disaster, and live happily in ordinary days, may all your wishes come true Do whatever you want, there is no rain or shine, I have run out of words Fallen leaves also need time to fall. Please give yourself some precious time to grow (•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ
It's so beautiful [laughing] The writing is very good [Like] The master-disciple line in the full text is very clear [lick the screen] The writing is delicate, friendly, and very realistic, making people feel warm [Send heart] The article describes in detail how the master guides the students step by step from ignorant teenagers to grow into responsible people Professor [Note] I have been reading for a long time, until I saw this book, I immediately got into it, and I felt like I had just met you at a late date [Bird of Birds] Friends who like the master-disciple novel, I highly recommend this book, it is really beautiful [love] [love] [love] [top post]
The character of Yun Tianming is very vivid. In the book, he comes from a small place, and then sees the vast world bit by bit, and slowly grows up. I was very touched. He was lucky enough to have met a very good teacher, and of course it was also because he was good enough! (The other one I read first, I fell in love with Huai and Sui, and I want to know them even more. I like them so much. I'm looking forward to when they will be revealed. Thank you to the author for your hard work. While you live your own life, don't forget to feed me [shy])