
After We Became Game Partners, My Ex Became My Captain
结个情缘后,我的前任成了我队长
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- Completed
- Length
- 290k Words
- Genre
- Unknown
- Subgenre
- Unknown
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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115Chapters
98Reads
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When I was writing this book, I wrote it as soon as my mind got hot. I haven't reviewed the book for so long. The content may still be not new, so I have to continue to work hard. I sincerely wish all the babies who like this book that they will be happy every day and that all their wishes will come true.
Overall, it looks good, but there are some places where it lacks a sense of immersion and is a bit dry. The writing can be optimized. The dialogue after a series of actions of the characters does not need to always describe "... Said" and the like. It would be smoother to delete it and add dialogue directly. Then, the fighting plot has a general sense of substitution. Some parts of the spoken language are changed to written language and it feels better. For example, the description of the berserker's momentum in Chapter 18 is a bit difficult. It's quite good, but I felt it was a bit overwhelming. After reading it for a while, I wanted to find a novel to read again (a personal problem). I put it on the bookshelf. I couldn't find the book and read it. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes.
I really like novels written in big letters. I find them all quite interesting. From the "competition" when they first met, to having to let go due to various reasons, to meeting again... They also met partners, friends, and fans who are willing to treat them sincerely... They are not people who can say soft words, but they will use actions to prove that I care about you.