Transmigrate into a Book: My Wicked Disciple Keeps Hoping to Defy Her Master

Let me briefly talk about the advantages I think. 1. This is partly due to the fact that the protagonist of Shuangwen has risen very quickly. 2. There are misunderstandings, but misunderstandings will not accumulate and the relationship will be noticed. 3. The protagonist's master is relatively stable, especially her master. There is a master who is the most powerful in the world and still favors her.

A very cute fairy tale I really like the description of the young girl's jealousy in the previous part, and the various forms of kissing are also very touching when written ww The junior sister who is extremely talented and is the villain is so good. Os keep in mind the truth, the old enemy is the wife, the master is the wife. ❤️❤️ The emotional line develops very quickly, and the content is compact. There are few chapters but each chapter contains a lot of content. The writing is very solid. There are many long sentences and long paragraphs, which makes it a bit tiring to read. The story line in the later period is a bit too big, and it is a bit boring to fight and kill. Also, if there is a slightly detailed introduction to the new characters, it is easy to get confused orz if you read it too quickly. With personal subjective factors, I still prefer to see young couples interact more. The extra chapters are a bit abrupt, mostly just introductions (?), Which are similar to the later questions. It looked very good in the early stage [sending my heart] Keep up the good work, it's over now. I wish Shuangshuang and Yunsu 99 (´▽`)ﾉKeep up the master-disciple relationship🤓

Overall, it's okay. There's nothing wrong with it. It's just that the plot is too tight and I wanted to write a lot of things. As a result, I feel like the protagonist hasn't had much rest and has been suffering. He's been giving out very little candy. The two of them have been rescuing each other to show their deep feelings.

The book is a good book, but this plot has... Except for the first few dozen chapters, which are not about the knife, the rest are all about the knife or on the way to the knife, and there are only a few chapters that are not about the knife. I want to see the sweet love ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

The content is interesting and the characters are well thought out. The emotional lines are also very rich. The main problem is that the emotional lines are too rich. And some of the logic may not be complete. But the overall sense is still very good. Recommended for anyone who likes dual heroines to give it a look.

Well, other than the realm being a bit messy, everything else is pretty good. It's estimated that more than a hundred chapters will be finished. Let's take care of it for a while.

It's very touching. The master changed his fate for his little apprentice, and never backed down even if it was the way of heaven. It's really touching. After reading Cheng Zi's book, I can better understand the pain of being forced to hurt, act, and hide for the one I love. Yun Su's image is also very full. The so-called right and wrong ways are just viewed from one's own standpoint. All races have things they want to protect. It doesn't matter whether they are immortals or human beings, evil, monsters or demons. The important thing is to keep their true intentions. Finally, I hope that everyone in this book can live happily in that world forever. On February 28, 2026, it will be finished with flowers!!

It's very pretty and has a high sweetness. The only drawback is that it's not pretty enough.

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This is a novel I really like. The writing is exquisite and delicate, and the description is meticulous. It is the best among the novels with two heroines that I have read. I recommend everyone to read it 😳