Honkai: Star Rail: A Journey Across the Universe from Scratch

It is currently a mid-to-high-end work among Beng Tie fans, but what is very commendable is that it is approached from a relatively novel angle and is well integrated with the underlying setting of Ben Tie's fate. The current development of the help of Botio's hometown is also my favorite. The only minor problem is that the writing is not very fluent and the language is a bit lacking. Looking forward to the next plot.

It's okay, but pick two thorns first. 1. Buli people have pheromones, which can exert fear on creatures, and have special attacks on fox people. 2. Buli people have stronger recovery power than Xianzhou people. Although they can be killed by beheading, they can be saved if they recover in time.

I write this review mainly because I can't hold back my desire to complain. There are too many criticisms that I will definitely say. Generally speaking, it's good, but some details were not done well, causing the plot to be unsustainable. I write this review mainly because I can't hold back my desire to complain. There are too many criticisms that I will definitely say. For example, at the beginning Bu Liren couldn't smell the protagonist in the grass next to him. Among the fox people rescued later, there were old people who could manage to get over it despite being tortured for many years and making them look old. But there was an obvious bug later. There were old people among the civilians written about the Xianzhou Celestial Beings. In fact, the Xianzhou Celestial Beings did not have this stage of aging. Playing the game and carefully observing the NPCs on the fairy boat, none of them are old. At most, they look like uncles with beards. The fox man will age rapidly in the few days before he is about to die. I haven't seen the setting copy of this aspect, but there are no old NPCs in the NPC, so there should be no aging. General Huaiyan looks like an old man. He is probably not a celestial being but another Fenghuo people (not only because of his appearance, but also because he is very old and has no signs of demonic body). Then comes the biggest plot bug I have seen so far. A group of dragon masters went to Jingyuan to cause trouble, and then called the Mingming Essence the sacred object of the Mingdharmadhara clan... Author, did you confuse the Moon Essence and the Mingshu Essence next door?

So far, it looks good. I have always felt that friendship is the most noble thing, but love brings down the epic feel of the story. The author did not write about how the female character fell in love with the protagonist. I think it looks good. It is my ideal me who came here, I experienced the story, and I left my footprints.

Not bad, not bad. The description of the protagonist is very good. There is no plot about Gale, and there is no invincibility or harem. There is only an ordinary person doing extraordinary things.

Haha, cool! ! Delicate emotional portrayal, not brainless plot arrangement The protagonist is a man of good temperament. His kindness and conscience drive the development of the plot. It is truly a masterpiece. Not much to say, come on, author!

Not bad, the plot is a bland [thinking], but I feel like the author wants to write a cool novel (there are some plots in the early stage that are not in line with the overall style of writing. The college student kills Bu Li by himself. It's not that I can't write it, but it just gave me the feeling that this novel is not the brainless and invincible kind of cool novel. It's a bit strange after writing it). This is just my personal opinion after reading it. The novel is overall very good. I recommend it [heartfelt]

I like this book very much. It has a very novel perspective. Although the battle plot is too exaggerated and some details are not dealt with, I really like the way the protagonist looks cold and indifferent, but in fact has a firm mind. However, the first two self-created plots have OOC because there is not much text in the game, and the characters themselves are relatively sane, but they don't feel too strong. But when it comes to the character image of Botio, it completely exposes the fact that the author is not familiar with the character's personality. Botio is designed to be a Western cowboy, uncivilized in speech, bold and impulsive, with the kind of "unscrupulous" side of a street gangster, and he is definitely the kind of wise leader who is rational and calm in planning the overall situation. Rather, he is a very charming yet gangster persona. The way a cowboy works is that he prefers to do it first rather than think about it. But I am still looking forward to the subsequent development of the plot. I really like the determination and freedom of the protagonist after going through all this. I just hope that the author can learn more about the character's personality. If you don't have time to play the game, you can also learn more about it through editing videos. Ooc characters in fan fiction are a big no-no.

If we don't take into account that the protagonist can kill the person who is secretly taught by the King of Medicine by stabbing his throat without stabbing the elixir palace, and that as a carbon-based monkey, he can kill the Buli people who are born with fertility and blessings, the story alone is still not bad [face covering]

She looks good, but I don't want her to be in a romantic relationship with Fei Xiao. When they first met, she was just an eight-year-old child, and according to her character in the game, she probably won't have this tendency. So I really don't want her to be in a romantic relationship.