Ye Luoli: What If Wang Mo Had Beauty on a Catastrophe Level?

Wen Wenmo is the group favorite, and her supreme beauty is the basis for attracting people to be favored, but this does not make her a mindless group favorite. She will add strength and status to the protagonist step by step, so that she can attack, retreat or stay as much as possible. She is smart and at the same time will not make people think that she has changed, but still has the original flavor. A heartthrob is a heartthrob, including girls. Everyone likes Momo, including the dolls in the doll shop. This is something few people write about. To sum up: great! I personally like it very much and recommend it!

This is the real heartthrob. Boss, you are really good at writing. I read it all night long. I just read it with the attitude of giving it a try at the beginning, but it turned out to be a pitfall. The Momo you wrote is really a perfect little girl. I can see that she is really loved. She is not only beautiful, but also has a family. In fact, I also want to see the silent love direction of my brothers and sisters. After all, childhood sweethearts are the best. Will they have love feelings? [Shy]

It's still pretty good-looking, but do you have a few small suggestions that you can take a look at? 1. In fact, the first chapter can be omitted or deleted as appropriate, because that chapter does not seem to have much plot content, and coupled with the mysterious creatures such as gods, it is not easy to shape well, so it will look a bit embarrassing╯▂╰ 2. The plot of Wang Mo's childhood can be deleted and merged because it is generally quite repetitive, and for a child, the above description seems a bit too exaggerated and seems a bit vain. The following plot is still very good ^ω^ I look forward to presenting a better story [sending my heart]

The author's version of Wang Mo simply satisfies my fantasy of a female protagonist. Because I have love, beauty, power, and money, I have the courage and confidence to fear anything. The author's love for the heroine is obvious. It fulfilled all my fantasies about a heroine who saves the world. I really like this article by the author. The author did not write the heroine to be so brainless, but gave her wisdom, strength, money, power, family background and enough love. The heroine in the author's writing is no longer the silly sweet girl in the anime, but has become a brave and powerful heroine who is true, kind and beautiful. From the author's writing, I can really feel that I will fall in love with the heroine before the people in the book.

It's good to read, but there are too few. I hope the author can update a few more chapters and never stop updating. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's really beautiful. In fact, you can just think of it as an ancient Mary Sue novel. It's very beautiful and very refreshing.

I really like the plot before magic, so happy, the world is just her playground. For a moment, I really wanted her not to squeeze into that alley and become Lao Shizi's savior. She was loved by everyone and had plenty of time to feel the beauty. It's a pity that she doesn't know how to do it. She wants to be an unrivaled hero and abandoning all sentient beings is not her. She is a kind-hearted, kind-hearted, and passionate girl. Fortunately, her creator favored her this time.

The best Ye Luoli fanfic I have ever read. The author's thinking is really advanced. The heroine no longer wears those princess dresses or Lo-skirts, but wears comfortable T-shirts and sweatshirts like an ordinary man. She is not a beautifully dressed princess with high heels, but a knight in armor and a savior. The girls are described as teenagers, and the female characters are not stereotyped. Who knows how excited and shocked I am when I see that many rich and powerful people are women! Cool

In fact, I have never read Ye Luoli's writing before. I have been in a bit of a book shortage recently. I read this name when I saw it. But I didn't expect that the writing is so good. It's really great. I was really attracted to it. Keep up the good work, baby, mua! So cool...ꉂ(ˊᗜˋ*)

Try to add age as much as possible. I don't see anyone being attracted to a teenage girl. It's too young. There is no other way, the heroine feels like she is deliberately trying to seduce. It doesn't look like I just like good colors at all, and the image is also very... Like a child, so I can't knock it out, and there are some middle-school diseases... And it feels like... At a young age, it gives me a feeling of flattery and confusion. The grade is also outrageous. The way to add favorability is better than writing it directly, and the heroine is not ignorant... Doesn't she have a sense of boundaries... Also, the author adds some details to some love at first sight, such as the wind or the wind. Anyway, it's just some descriptions to set off the atmosphere. No, ah~ Oops~ pinch~ ... Normal people would not do this unless they do it deliberately or there is a problem with pronunciation. What a normal person would do is, ah ah ah ah ah, ah ah ah, pinch... A little bit of middle school is a joy, but if you go beyond that, you're nervous. In the end, it's not as good as the real Wang Mo...