Me: I Gave Zhu Yuanzhang a Bowl of Rice from the Start

All excellent works are actually talking about one thing. Great author, please write quickly and become popular!

It looks quite satisfactory. But! You don't write in AI, do you?? If it were written by AI, I would give a negative review. There are vague problems with Zhang Shicheng's resurrection and repeated dialogues verbatim. If you were more tolerant in your real person's writing, it would be unforgivable in AI's writing... The emotional line is okay, not that realistic. The plot is pretty good from the perspective of an idealistic fairy tale. ... The plot should be your own idea, right? The characteristics of the AI ​​​​walking process are too obvious. Within one chapter of Chapter 52, the process of breaking the city is exactly the same, and the content of the shouting has only been changed in wording. You win with plot, but lose with execution. Just hope the plot idea is indeed your own. How can this last forever... I'm looking forward to seeing you revising it!

I've caught up with the latest chapter. The plot is good, clean and neat, like a historical record. I really can't bear to let this book be ruined by some readers who don't read it seriously, so I will talk about the previous book reviews one by one. 1. "The army was in hand but he surrendered and was named the Duke of Tang". In fact, the protagonist of the plot did not surrender at all. The actual plot is: the protagonist raises an army and borrows the name of the Red Scarf Army, and then the real owner of the Red Scarf Army sends someone to ask if he is willing to submit. The protagonist refused and said, "Your name is very useful, I still want to use it, but if I don't listen to you, you will hit you and I will hit mine." Later, the Red Scarf Army supported a puppet emperor. When the emperor made him a duke, the real leader of the Red Scarf Army gave the protagonist the title of Tang Guogong to show his closeness (the protagonist was already very powerful at that time). The protagonist said: Yes, the name is more useful, but I still don't listen to you. If you hit you, I will hit mine. 2. "Suddenly became Zhu Yuanzhang's subordinate". This is pure nonsense. I have followed the latest chapter, and I have never seen the protagonist talking about Zhu Yuanzhang. Even except for the time when he was given a bowl of rice, I have never seen Zhu Yuanzhang until now. I don't know how these two readers read the book, but I feel it is necessary to say this Finally, the phenomenon of Izanami appears three times in this book, but it's harmless. It's basically the same situation, so it's just a joke. Also, why does my paragraph rating disappear after the comments are finished? Author, do you have any clues? @Tiezhu is an iron pillar

You may not have much idea about defending a city. No one in history has been able to reduce the battle damage to 3 to 1 when sieging a city. Ten to one is even less. As long as the city is not besieged and there is no support, 10,000 people can defend the city with 100,000 people until the end of the world 🤦

It's well written, very good. But Zhu Yuanzhang, who supported the Han people to death, is gone, so I am more resistant in my heart.

Finally, there is someone who has traveled through time without kneeling down and licking the ancients. Like one

A very exciting historical fictional novel The author's writing is exquisite and the plot is exciting. It's worth watching.

If you can read it, don't worry about so many details. Although there are many reasonable theories based on historical and textual research, it's already pretty good if you can read it 🤭

It's very suitable for the fast pace of 🍅. It feels like I can't write 500,000 words at this speed.

The writing is pretty good, better than most historical texts, but I can't stand it, it's a bit strange...