【Parenting day-to-day + one heroine + campus belle + heroine pursues hero + System】
Chen Yuan had just quit his job and was getting ready to look for a new one when he discovered that the 300,000 yuan he had painstakingly saved by scrimping and saving was gone!
It turned out his wife, Lin Wei, who stayed home to care for their child, had taken it to start a herbal-milk-tea shop after her best friend, Wang Lili, egged her on!
That wasn't all. Lin Wei had also taken out a 200,000-yuan loan, swearing she was going to make the business work!
With no other choice, Chen Yuan took their child and got divorced.
On the day of the divorce, Chen Yuan received the "Peerless Cuisine System."
Taking his daughter, Chen Youyou, with him, he took over the failed business left behind by a fellow mom.
A "pure vegetarian breakfast shop"!
With no money to replace the sign, he had no choice but to open anyway.
He threw himself into the work, starting with fresh pork buns.
To his surprise, his System could stack buffs onto his food!
Beauty Soy Milk buff: skin radiance +10%, lasts 3 days.
The female office workers in the neighborhood went wild for it!
Fresh Pork Wontons: concentration +15%, lasts 4 hours.
Students lined up to buy them!
There was also rice porridge that improved deep sleep, and meat pies that eased fatigue.
And that wasn't all. Su Qingxue, the campus belle he'd long since forgotten about, came looking for him.
"Senior, this time I'm definitely going to win you over!"
Then there was Chen Youyou, cheering her on: "Dad, I like Big Sister Qingxue!"
Overall, it's okay. The image of the male protagonist is actually good, but the fact that he and his ex-wife have never been separated is a poisonous point. However, the existence of the female protagonist makes it impossible for her to remarry, which creates another poisonous point. Secondly, the psychological description of the heroine is quite normal. After reading that the author has written several books on Family Love➕Cooking, I guess she hasn't turned a corner yet. This is what Tomato says. Try not to have any poisonous points in your book, and even if there are, readers must be able to accept them, otherwise the results will definitely not be good. This book can be said to be the author's masterpiece, of course not if the author continues to write. In short, at least the author put a lot of effort into handwriting and it is not AI, and it is relatively smooth. It is just a matter of strengthening the writing and setting processing.
It's okay, I just don't understand why we are already divorced. Why didn't we tell our family and kept it secret all this time? Wouldn't it be even more explosive if we found out later?
When will I get my certificate from my junior sister? And break up with your ex?
Very good article about raising children, five-star praise, keep up the good work
It looks good, but why not update it?
It's really good, and the prices are normal, unlike some food articles where the prices are extremely high, and the hero's daughter is also quite cute.
Looks good, please update more
I stayed up late and watched it for two hours. It was very interesting and heartwarming to listen to it.
It has a sense of life, the image of the male protagonist is better created, Xiao Youyou is so cute,
Very good, a really good father really cares about his children. I hope the rhythm of the emotional drama can be faster.
Overall, it's okay. The image of the male protagonist is actually good, but the fact that he and his ex-wife have never been separated is a poisonous point. However, the existence of the female protagonist makes it impossible for her to remarry, which creates another poisonous point. Secondly, the psychological description of the heroine is quite normal. After reading that the author has written several books on Family Love➕Cooking, I guess she hasn't turned a corner yet. This is what Tomato says. Try not to have any poisonous points in your book, and even if there are, readers must be able to accept them, otherwise the results will definitely not be good. This book can be said to be the author's masterpiece, of course not if the author continues to write. In short, at least the author put a lot of effort into handwriting and it is not AI, and it is relatively smooth. It is just a matter of strengthening the writing and setting processing.
It's okay, I just don't understand why we are already divorced. Why didn't we tell our family and kept it secret all this time? Wouldn't it be even more explosive if we found out later?
When will I get my certificate from my junior sister? And break up with your ex?
Very good article about raising children, five-star praise, keep up the good work
It looks good, but why not update it?
It's really good, and the prices are normal, unlike some food articles where the prices are extremely high, and the hero's daughter is also quite cute.
Looks good, please update more
I stayed up late and watched it for two hours. It was very interesting and heartwarming to listen to it.
It has a sense of life, the image of the male protagonist is better created, Xiao Youyou is so cute,
Very good, a really good father really cares about his children. I hope the rhythm of the emotional drama can be faster.