The Sea Otter Lady's Skybird

It's just a spur of the moment article. I just wanted to write it. Hermione's strong and smart nature will not change, but her empathy will make her soften because of Giselle, and Giselle, who might have been bullied at school, will also have a relatively beautiful campus life because of Hermione (where is the beauty). As for the protagonist's buffs, there are many, very many. I can only say that she has almost become a heartthrob [learned] [learned]

Are you really not considering replacing the cover? Because I keep scrolling until I finally click on it to see who has thought about it, it's quite interesting. If you like the daily warmth, you can check it out. The writing style is gentle and delicate, and although the writing power is a little lacking, it is OK. It is worth reading, and I have not found any mistakes yet. At present, the main storyline is intertwined with the story line of "Warm Daily Life" and "Harry's Team". It is well integrated and nothing that seems too OOC is acceptable. I prefer the part where the two get along, the innocent Hufflepuff and the evil (bushi) Gryffindor hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, the two of them eat each other without saying a word. The mysterious oriental mixed-blood is actually a bit naturally stupid, and Hermione, who has a bit of a big bad wolf attribute, will be eaten to death? ? Looking forward to the progress between the two of you. Jie Jie Jie. In addition, I haven't seen the bloodline of the protagonist yet. I don't know if the latest chapter has been revealed. I was a little worried at first because of curiosity, but then I decided that just watching Tiantian's daily life is enough (it's so easy to be satisfied)

The writing is very good. Reading between the lines now, I feel a very comfortable and comfortable feeling, just a touch of warmth. I don't know how to describe it in order to describe my feelings specifically, but I don't know why there are so few reviews and readers. Finally, come on, author, your writing is great ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )! ! ! Tied ( • ᴗ • )

Come on, big sister who writes about Lily [Adoration]

It's well written, I just have some suggestions. The words at the beginning of some chapters may be an introduction or something, and you can add a dividing line between the sentence and the subsequent plot. As for the character dialogue, I hope that the speeches of different subjects can be divided into paragraphs, and not all crowded into one paragraph, which will be very tiring to watch. Anyway, come on, author!

A very good book, it reminds me of the afternoon reading in the library, the feeling of sunlight passing through the window and shining on the pages and clothes. The language is brisk and a little jumpy, like a dream while taking a nap. All in all, it is a warm and interesting story with a bit of coolness.

Very good book! However, the cover and name are a bit pity. I had to read them many times before I was interested in clicking in. I almost missed it [I almost cried] and finally tied it. The next step is to wait for a long time to be serialized...

It can be said that among the HP double heroines I have watched, they are definitely among the top ones. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] It's tied, come and see how long it took [eating melon]

Delicious and well written. The independent plot of this article and the plot of the original work are blended very smoothly, and the writing style is comfortable. It seems that it has been tied now, but the progress of the relationship between the two girls is indeed a bit slow. Little Giselle has already realized her feelings for Hermione. Sweet love should be coming soon, right? Looking forward to it, Mrs. Author will write soon🙏 and I want to see more of Hermione and Giselle getting along.

The advancement and subtle adaptation of the plot are top-notch in HP. The interaction between the two heroines is comfortable and not burdensome. The supporting characters in this book are appropriately described. It is a good book.