After Two Years in Hiding, I'm a Top Esper Instructor in a Civilian Post

The subject matter is quite novel and suitable for slow-paced viewing. Although it is a group portrait article, you cannot ignore the primary and secondary. When writing multiple perspectives, you can appropriately reduce the perspective of one side that does not contain much information. The content of the branch plot should not be more important than the main plot. In addition, too many hidden lines will cause too many questions. It is recommended to properly dispel the confusion. The hidden lines can also describe tiny details, but at the same time, the readers can retain a certain impression. You can consider adding descriptions of supporting characters to enrich the image of the main characters, and don't make the characters too thin. A person is multi-faceted, and a character is also constructed. You can show different reactions through events, showing individual differences. The current characters have similar reactions, which makes the characters seem thin, but overall they are good. Come on ❤️

It's very interesting, but can there be more storyline about Yan Shen Zhao? I really like the character of this character.

This is the first time I read a group portrait article. The pace in the early stages is a bit slow, so I probably won't be able to retain many people, because I can't stand it hahahaha. But I will continue to pursue it and try to read it. Don't ask me why, I am short of books 😢😢😢

It's good to watch, but I feel like the protagonist's role is a bit lacking.

It looks good, but I wish Yan Shen Zhao had more scenes

Dear darlings! This book is my first attempt at writing a group portrait article. There are currently 78 ratings, but I can only see 32 of them. Many treasures have left their thoughts in the rating area, but I can't see them. If you think there is something wrong in the article, please point it out and I will carefully modify it. (｢･ω･)｢Hey

Yes, the characters are distinct and the plot is varied. It's well worth watching.

The subject matter is quite novel and I look forward to the follow-up plot. The writing is immature and some settings and expressions are not rigorous and concise enough.

This book is so beautiful. I can't think of any words to describe it

Fortunately, the plot is complicated and contains many secrets. Can attract interest in reading.