The Max-Level Expert Gets Transported into Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation

Apart from the fact that the series is not finished, there are no other flaws. The characters are not ruined, and all the contradictions in the original plot are handled very well. Everyone has their own difficulties, but the Heijiang family, who are not brainless, all have a happy ending. Good reviews from Wu Xicheng and Xue Xiao👍

It's been so long since I've seen this kind of normal fanfic in Mo Dao. The ones I found were either on Crazy Heijiang's Family, or Crazy Black Xianxian, and the ones about demolishing Wangxian's CP. I'm really convinced, and I finally saw this normal fanfic.

It's super pretty, really really pretty. The heroine is really a queen, powerful and sober. I really like the development of this story. It really makes up for a lot of regrets. I really hope that Jiang Yanli can find his own freedom and happiness. After reading more than 80 chapters, the description of women throughout the whole process is very, very friendly. There is no objectification, no sexualization, and no bad stereotypes. The description of the female supporting characters in the article is also very good and very friendly. It's not the kind of novel that claims to love women but only loves the heroine (yesterday I read a novel like this and I was really angry. Almost all the villains were female and ended badly) This book was really enjoyable to read, and I really like the concept of the heroine in the author's novel.

It's so heartwarming. Although it is a fanfic, it really makes up for the regrets of the original text. The writing is also good. The plot is not draggy and there is no watery plot. It is really good. I look forward to the subsequent plots. It was really good in the early stage, but now the update is too slow... In the latest chapter, the meridian tropism of Chinese medicine must be described, and the fable storyline must also be described, which will help the plot 😦 To be honest, the interaction between the system and the heroine is quite annoying sometimes. Today, the system has to describe what skin it wears, what actions it takes, and what stupid things it says. Originally, two chapters a day would be okay, but writing so much system interaction What a waste. There are also things like the heroine's past, the interactions between elves, and the powerful weapons given to her. Writing so much will not help the plot. The heroine is the most powerful existence in the world, so why bother describing her past? Write more characters about plot tasks and push the plot faster. There are so many chapters. I don't know whether the author wants Jiang and Yuli to break up or break up. Don't put too much ink on the small characters. It's time to think about Wei and Lan's first encounter. Will Wei, who grew up in love, do something outrageous? Why will Lan fall in love with him? Whether the Wen family can still be crazy when there is a female protagonist is what the author needs to pay most attention to [rolls eyes]

This fanfic is very well written, not OOC at all, and it is very close to the original character design. The plot is also very smooth, and the set conflicts and plot developments are not abrupt. I wait for Daddy to have dinner every day, so Daddy must keep writing! !

The author's writing is so beautiful that it almost eliminates the previous regrets, and it is not the kind of CP article. And she is really the kind of super cool heroine who can smooth out all the unhappiness! Let A Xian really become a child with a family! I'm really touched. The author please continue to update! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

A super nice book! This is the most thoughtful and well-written book I have ever seen! The original heroine Fu Jin is invincible in the whole book. Although she is said to be on vacation to raise children, she does not lack pampering. Every little bitter gourd in the original book has a happy childhood. The only regret is that the Zangshi Nagasawa couple died before Fu Jin came. After the tie, I saw that the souls of the two people must have been collected by Fu Jin. I don't know if they can be resurrected in the future. I look forward to it. The most important thing to boast about is that Dada has arranged a kindergarten for Wangxian! It's best to drink it if you're a childhood sweetheart or something! Even the fingerprint unlocking and wiping plot has been advanced! It's just that there is little interaction now. I look forward to more interactions. The most enjoyable part is the treatment of Wen Gou. A Jin is like a criminal capitalist. All the domineering Wen Gou are captured and farmed. Wen Chao is directly thrown to Liger Mountain and tortured to death. Wen Zhuliu is even directly abandoned and thrown away to experience A Xian's cry for losing the golden elixir n times! It's cool to sum it up in one word! ! To sum up, it is a strong recommendation! The writing is good, the plot is great, and the daily life is very heartwarming. You must read it! (Os: Tangtang must give us an extra update [blowing kiss]) @

It took me a day to tie it up. It's so beautiful. I saw the author revealing some details of the original work. It warmed my heart. I also cried hard at times. I finally understood the meaning of that fan sentence. You can give me the happiness that the original work cannot give (╥╥)

Author, I really like this fanfic you wrote. "The Patriarch of the Demonic Way" is my first novel. This book brings me a lot of joy and regret. When I was in the first grade of junior high school, I often fantasized that I could help them in their world. Through your writing, I saw the perfection that I was looking for when I was 13 years old. Fujin is very powerful. Her strength can heal Wei Wuxian's childhood trauma, pull Jiang Yanli into the path of cultivation, improve Jiang Cheng's character flaws, save Meng Shi and Meng Yao from the hot water, and save the relationship between Yu Ziyuan and Jiang Fengmian... She has filled up the scars of the "ancestral master of the devil", and she has comforted the hearts of readers like me. Thank you to the author for creating such Fujin. Moreover, the author has greatly compensated for the regrets of the original work and ensured the logic and quality of the entire book. In fact, when reading, I can feel the high level of literacy between the lines. I even need to look up the meaning of some words to know. I am a person who likes to read novels. This is the first time I write such a long book review. I really want to let the author know that there is such a person who likes this fanfic you wrote. I hope that my like can become the motivation for your creation. (I usually use my old mobile phone to read novels. My old mobile phone does not have a phone number, so I cannot comment, so the author, the reading time you see is not the real reading time)

This book is very wonderful and wonderful. The author's understanding of the original book is very deep and thorough. There is no OOC. I feel that the author is very thoughtful and understands the original text to the extent that it can make people rethink the original text. Moreover, the author's profound literary skills make him a very good fan.