Wei Wuxian, the Yiling Patriarch, is reborn atop the Burial Mounds, carrying the memories of his previous life and boundless resentment. This time, he is no longer a frail man others can frame at will. He is the Ghost King, sovereign of the Three Realms, who commands ten thousand ghosts and makes his word law.
Prove his innocence? No need! He has returned to overturn the old order and establish new rules. When the cultivation clans unite against him, he establishes the “Ghost Domain” on the Burial Mounds and becomes its overlord. He storms Golden Carp Tower and publicly calls Jin Guangyao, the Chief Cultivator, to account, exposing every scheme before his overwhelming power!
And by his side is always that white-robed musician. From their reunion and their refusal to part, to the “life-and-death pact” they make when cornered, and then a grand wedding announced to the Three Realms... Lan Wangji declares through his actions: “Wei Ying is my cultivation partner.”
But their old grudges are only the prelude. A mysterious organization called the “Guixu Divine Cult” emerges, and a “Second Sunshot Campaign,” set to sacrifice tens of thousands of cultivators, is quietly being planned. Then an ancient demon, powerful enough to rip open the sky screen, descends and drags the whole world into the apocalypse. When the former enemy of the cultivation clans becomes the only hope of saving all living beings, what will he choose?
I'm currently reading Chapter 17, and the rating box pops up, so I'll just write it down first. Please forgive me. First of all, I feel that the author wants to write a story with a rich plot, so the power and settings of Wei Wuxian becoming the Ghost King will be described in detail in the early stage, and the writing style will be organized and logical. However, I would also like to make some suggestions here. If the author can see it and thinks it is good for reference, but if it is not good, then please laugh it off. 1. The presentation of the worldview is too deliberate and has a flat and straightforward feel. As a result, the early chapters are too long and unrefined. The key points are everywhere and everything becomes average. It is recommended that the description of the worldview can be developed through the plot and the interaction between characters. 2. Similar to 1, Wei Wuxian's identity as the Ghost King is too emphasized. There are actually many repeated sentences in the description. Of course I want to see him majestic as the Ghost King, but rather than directly telling him "he is awesome", I want to see the awesomeness of the character, identity, and power as the plot develops. 3. Because I have only read Chapter 17, I will not comment on the performance of the character in the future. For now, I feel that the character is a bit OOC. The concept of the core soul was originally set up and the control was taken back, but it did not show much of Wei Ying's original strength and his unswerving way of doing things even if he walks on a single-plank bridge for what he cherishes in his heart. He is able to ignite a spark in the dark and illuminate what he wants. The type of person who helps, but in the current article, it has been shown that he is too standing on the commanding heights, too arrogant, and thus shows a more or less indifferent attitude. (As I read it, I want to say: Baby! Have you been taken over by the strange thing that robbed you in front of you?) It is true that the setting of the Ghost King is a high position with such absolute power, but the form of expression feels that it can be more interesting if it is combined with the characteristics of the character.
This book is very good, and the writing is also very good, but there are some background changes in the characters, especially the background of Xianxi. The background of confidence in the original text is strong, sunny, kind, positive, and optimistic about facing the world. Just like what is said in the article, no one cares about the affairs behind you for a few days or more. Others take other people's sunny roads, I walk my one-plank bridge, and I prefer to walk on a one-plank bridge until dark. I don't care about other people's opinions. I always insist on myself, bohemian, and unrestrained. But the background of Xianxian's character in this book has changed. The background of Xianxian's character in this book has become aloof, cold and crazy, which is a bit OOC. And in the original book, it has a combination of humanity and divinity. It has human kindness and divine compassion. He knows people's suffering, and he will sympathize with them, but he will never be so cold and hard. But in this book, Xie Xie's humanity has been erased. Originally, he was an emotional character, which is not to say that he has no emotions, but his original emotional line was when his senior sister died. He would be very distressed, heartbroken, and heartbroken. But in this book, he is I think this is a weakness. He only cares about his own interests and has nothing to do with his own emotions and expressions. He may even deliberately ridicule himself. Do you think that in such a society, Xianxian is very powerful now? So at this point, the entire character's background is changed. And Da Da, if you want to write this kind of ruthless line, you can add a trace of compassion into the ruthlessness. Faced with the persistence of these things, he will now face it with optimism, and will also treat this matter. This is how his country is governed in an orderly manner, but he will not call himself a king and put himself in a very high position. Instead, he will be very close to the people. Because of Xianxian's background, it is the image of a little sun that burns itself to warm others, but I didn't say that the author didn't write it well, because I think Xianxian in the original work is very miserable, and it would be good to be really selfish, but then the author said that you are selfish. This emotion is more exaggerated, maybe because of some subjective reasons. It forms a kind of hard, cold and emotionless character who only cares about his own interests. For example, when facing his previous emotions, he would feel that he was not strong enough and failed to protect others. But if you want to write this kind of cold line, you can say, even if I was not strong enough in the past, I have enough strength now, and I will not let him hurt the people close to me anymore. Finally, this is my subjective understanding, and it is not very well written. But I still think it would be great if you polished the character's background a little more. Well, what I said may not sound nice, so don't scold me. Well, maybe it's because I just read Chapter 17. Maybe my senses are more one-sided.
The writing is good, with a little too much detail.
I've seen many types. This one is different. I hope Wangji can protect him. Xianxian is too tired.
It's so pretty and so interesting hehe [Love]
The writing is very good, but it's a bit unclear. But I believe that you will try your best to do better [sending heartfelt messages]
Yes, yes, yes, yes, it's good. It's good. It's good. It's super good. It's very good. It's very good. It's very good. The plot is good. It's good. It's good. It's good. I'm in love with this book. It's good. It's good. It's good. It's good.
The author will update it soon. I hope that Wei Ying's strength will reach the ceiling. I hope that they will be happy every day. I hope that they can ascend to become gods.
It would be particularly nice without cp, super nice, but the author's character Xian Xian in the book is still too soft-hearted.
It's really beautiful, highly recommended