Honkai: Star Rail: I Have No Limits

The quality is above average and highly recommended. The protagonist has a good personality and can be serious or funny. To be honest, there is a little bit less sweetness, but it is also very good. The plot is original and has some original content that I personally feel is quite interesting. The update speed is not slow. The only shortcoming may be that there will be some small changes in the characters. This book is still highly recommended. I hope the author can continue to work hard, and I hope this book can become popular.

It feels like a novice trying to write a good novel, and the writing is relatively fluent, but the language is not concise enough. However, there is no need to pursue it too much. You can try to remove the dross from this tediousness and turn it into your own characteristics.

I also trained the AI ​​very hard just now, ah, because I asked the AI ​​who the heroine of this novel was. Finally, she told me that it was Xilian, but I found that Xilian appeared in two chapters in this novel, which was not enough. I asked him again, and he said that the heroine was Hanabi. In the end, I stood with the AI ​​for more than ten minutes, and finally talked about who the heroine was. I found the heroine in the comments of this novel. I can only say that the AI ​​is still too powerful. The AI ​​Yuanbao I used, I was wondering if he didn't know about it at all or didn't search for this novel? I asked him who the protagonist was, and he told me that the protagonist's name was Bai Mo. I told AI that the protagonist's surname was Lin, and he said the protagonist's name was Lin Mo. I gave him the full name of the protagonist, whose surname was Lin Zhao. I thought he could even name the protagonist, so I asked him where was the first planet the protagonist landed on when he first came to this world? He told me about the space station, and then I told me that the planet where the protagonist came to is the planet Yperta. He told me about the hometown of the Black Tower, the planet Yperta next to the space station. He said it was the hometown of the Black Tower. After hard training, I finally made him completely change.

The battle is very long, and the description of the protagonist's source of power and heart is quite profound, even a little unnecessarily protracted. The emotional line is very delicate, but some details could be concise and the look and feel would be better.

I feel that there is a Star Dome Railway, a place suitable for traveling to all kinds of wonderful planets and weird aliens in Canada. There is no need to follow the main line. It would be great to have a whimsical and self-created planet adventure. To be honest, which planet in the main line of the game has only people. It is too boring. There are also a bunch of factions in the simulated universe that almost never appear in the main line. You can also take them out and write about them.

OMG this writing is so creamy and smooth to me. This is the most enjoyable article I have ever read on Star Iron. If the author keeps up his good work, I believe this book will definitely become a hit🔥

I have read the first 30 chapters word for word. It would be nice if the emotional narrative was more realistic. The description of the environment could be more detailed. The characters are three-dimensional and well written. It is my favorite type. I just love Xiao Sanyue. I will read another 30 chapters and evaluate it again. Come on, I hope the update will be faster [laughs] The subsequent emotional scenes are okay, as long as you don't feel embarrassed, the only one who is embarrassed is others, and I think pure love is really sacred [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen], the pace is slow and has a lot of foreshadowing, my favorite is Little March [shy][shy][shy] Let me read Chapter 30 again and evaluate it again [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The sweetness is beyond the limit, and the gospel of a pure love warrior (I may not be one) can be my year-round version of sweetness.

Yes, it seems to be a single heroine on March 7th, and the current emotional line is sweet but not greasy. I hope the author can balance emotion, plot, and excitement, maintain the standard, and keep up the good work!

When will Weng Xing end?