A Hogwarts Love Story: Luna's Brother

Okay, kids, I am Shennong, this is good food The emotional description and detailed description are almost impeccable, and the plot guidance of the original characters is also good. By the way, Alleria was dealt with this year, and next year it will be Celestine. Then the third year will be squeezed out by two girls, and fourth year Luna will join the battlefield. If this continues, the protagonist will really die in bed ( Can't sleep all night, update quickly I wanted to say that the recent development of the plot has been a bit delayed, but today I have a big one. What else can I say? You are right. Also, we are not considering deleting Luna for the time being.

Conclusion first: a HP novel worth reading Advantages: The author's writing skills are still good, and there are no poisonous points so far (it may also be because my magic resistance is high) The description of emotions is very delicate, and slowly warms up in daily life. The feelings for each heroine are not abrupt, but give people a natural feeling. The main plot is not just the traditional fight against Voldemort. The image of the original heroine is well created (so far) The description of daily life is very warm. Although the main plot is not a refreshing article and cannot bring a sense of refreshment, it does not give people a feeling of frustration, but can arouse more empathy. It is different from most current HP fans. It has a unique and unique style. It gave me a sense of freshness when I first saw it. Disadvantages: There are still too few updates at present, and this kind of daily article still needs to be long to be read at once. Therefore, there will be many people raising books, and the data of many people raising books will not be very good and will disappear easily. Summary: The author will update soon! ! ! Not enough! ! !

The author is very different from many so-called "literary youth" writers in Tomato. The words are beautiful but not artificial, the rhythm is slow but not procrastinating, and he combines the wildness of the original setting with the distinctive personality of his own original characters. I just feel that it is not enough. Please update more quickly [Adoration][Adoration] After reading the back part, I can only say that the previous review was high. It can be seen that the author is good at writing daily romance articles rather than highly plot-oriented articles. After entering the main line, the author has great logical problems. There is no battle of wits and even the cause and effect cannot be explained clearly. Every crisis is inexplicably solved with the so-called "power of love" (Thinking about the "power of love" of love between the protagonists, 11-year-old elementary school students who have known each other for less than a year, I really can't stand it.) In the original work, the power of love only appears at the end, and it has not been used again and again. Every time it is used, it gives people the feeling of plot killing the villain. Be cautious with low anti-toxicity. However, the daily interactions are indeed well written. If you can accept the author's logic, it's not impossible to read it.

Overall it looks great. The writing style is literary and artistic. Although the plot of the original work is not much, it is slowly unfolding. The emotion is light, but you can still notice the existence. There are many wonderful ideas in the article, or various adjectives, and it feels like a fairy tale [laughs] [note]

Needless to say, the writing style is excellent and the writing power is excellent. After reading books for so many years, I found a treasure on Tomato. The writing style is not vulgar, but it does not appear noble either. It has a slight sense of warmth, of course from the current perspective. I really hope that the author will not write the so-called "Shura Field" (that kind of straightforward, emotional Shura Field) plot in the future. It's not bad, but it just feels like a waste of your writing. I feel that everyone in this article should have the feeling of still water running deep, implicit but not plain, turbulent but not expressive. Of course it is just my own personal wish and cannot represent anyone else. I sincerely hope that the author can continue writing it.

After reading this book, I can tell that the author must have written it carefully. The writing style is relatively refreshing and healing. The update speed is similar to that of other authors. The quality is good. The number of words in each chapter is generally more than 5,000 words. There is also a knife mixed in (I think it is), but I feel that the author should be able to give a good ending. All in all, this book is very good and one of the best in my bookshelf. I hope the author will continue writing and not stop updating.

Fairy is so beautiful. The author's vivid and beautiful writing style makes people feel the warmth and love as if they were there. The emotional scenes are in line with everyone's identity. Luna is fairy-like and clingy. One of the two girls is passionate and reserved, and the other is lazy and deep. Although there are many female protagonists, it is one of the few that truly matches the HP love theme.

The writing is delicate and the description of expressions fits the characters. The first time I read it, I was leaning on the back of the bed before going to bed, with the warm yellow desk lamp next to me. After reading it, I just felt that the time was just right, warm and soothing. The stories written by the author are like the breeze in early summer, neither arrogant nor impetuous, blowing slowly over my face, not in a hurry, but just taking away the slight heat. Rated as: Writing: 90 points Story: 85 points Immersion: 80 points Summary: I found another gold in the history of tomatoes.

It's quite interesting. Except for Luna, the characters of the other two heroines are great, but maybe it's because of their age. The literary flavor is a bit heavy, and there is a lot of jumping plots, such as the Sorcerer's Stone and the Chamber of Secrets. It can be felt that it is deliberately intended to speed up the development. The author is busy with studies, and many of them are saved and published on time without any changes based on readers' suggestions. I also hope that the author can write other things after the college entrance examination. By the way, he can enrich the writing style and try to connect the events better. Finally, I also hope that the author will be named on the gold list for the college entrance examination next year.

This is a novel that is really burdened by chapters. It is really delicate and beautiful. For readers, a chapter of seven to eight thousand words is indeed very satisfying, but if I hadn't taken a look at the number of words and the comment area, I wouldn't have started reading this chapter at this time, which would indeed affect my performance. It will take a long time to finish writing it