Class Change: Is the Succubus Queen Beautiful? I Traded the Campus Belle for Her

The overall plot is good and the driving speed is very fast. There are currently four female protagonists: Catherine (the second vampire princess), Albena (the succubus queen), Lan Ruotong (the eldest daughter of the Lan family, her father Lan Xiangdong is the bitter cold monarch), Angelis (the evil fallen nun) (the protagonist's subordinates are the most powerful). The protagonist has a brain, and the villain also has a brain. Many Internet memes and book fans prefer to make jokes, and the author puts his status very low. Worth a look

There are many articles written by women, if you can read them, please support them. However, the most basic thing is that the heroine should not wear revealing clothes in front of other men. This problem has already appeared once (the tattered nun's uniform), and a new chapter is here (the succubus wears revealing clothes, and then appears with the male vampire count), so be careful to avoid lightning. However, the author still listens to the advice. I will give it five stars after the changes are completed. It's not easy to write stories with multiple female protagonists these days. Everything has been changed, now there is no problem

The plot is classic and the routine is simple, but it is really fun. If you lose your brain and ignore the poisonous points, it is a good novel. However, from the current reading, I feel that the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. The most important thing is the description of the battle. This is the standard that best reflects whether the novel is refreshing or not. The description of the battle scenes is too simple and tasteless. , There are only a few action descriptions, and more of them are off-site commentary. The spectators talk a lot, which greatly affects the sense of immersion and makes the battle less exciting. The author can learn more about fists and physical, magic and bombardment, which can greatly improve the perception. There are other shortcomings, such as Lan Ruotong's emotions are too blunt, and it is too fake to make a young lady fall in love just because the protagonist persists. It feels like it is just to advance the plot and collect the harem. Everything else is fine and watchable.

The protagonist's IQ is online, and there is no estrangement... You have to eat! Milky white snowflakes and turkey-flavored crispy rice must be eaten ruthlessly.

I really like the setting of this book. The world view is similar to the mmorpg game world. The various settings basically have the feeling of a game. It can be regarded as traveling into the real game world. It is rare to find such a book with such authentic taste. However, the author said that the data of this book is not good. It will be gone. It will be sad. I hope you will read this book. The author must hold on. I think the title can be changed, such as "Abyss Walker: Sacrifice to the White Lotus School Belle Contract Succubus" or something like that. This title is just average, and the title "The Big Adventure" is a bit unclear.

As always, the style of the villain is great. The guide to the art of war has a good attitude towards reading and will produce high-quality products. The articles are invincible and exciting. The harem of beauties is fun and practical. The character of the protagonist is also charming and cool. There are few conscientious authors!

The writing is very good, the setting is rigorous, the plot has no obvious poisonous points, and the writing style is also good. It is a good book, but there are too few. I will update ten chapters a day [note]

Continuing the style of the previous book, although it is a repetitive theme, it is not too repetitive. The plot advancement is very good. I want to watch Gu Yuan is as thick as Onako, who is cold on the outside and dragon lady on the inside!

I read it in one go. The advantage is that it combines Western fantasy, lord, farming, game, and villain writing. Although the settings are a hodgepodge and the writing is a bit cliche, fortunately, what is presented in the end is a good dish and the writing is smooth. The disadvantage is that some of the plots miss the point. It feels like it has been laid out for a long time and ended hastily. It may be because the outline has been revised. The female protagonists are a little thinner. The supporting roles are mostly facial characters. I think we can imitate Ji Cha and create a separate small unit drama for each female character. Finally, the author's words at the end of each chapter can be less or put in the comment area, which will affect the coherence of the plot. The author listens to the advice and hangs out intensively in the comment area. Like it. Subjective score 9.2

Good looking, good looking mouth and teeth! , There's nothing bad about it, it's very enjoyable, the male protagonist is very strong, but he doesn't feel too outrageous and boring, the plot is compact, and there's nothing bad about it, the male protagonist is not the kind of guy who has a small head controlling a big head.