Sharing a Dorm: Light and Shadow

It's very good. The plot and writing are the best among the classmates I've read. There are also some minor flaws. There are too many emotional pulls and emotional scenes between the protagonist and Luo Xue, which are everywhere. Although my favorite girl among my classmates is Luo Xue, what I want to see more is the warm relationship between the protagonist and his classmates, his abilities, description and growth in the work. You can have love, but it's a bit annoying if it's everywhere. Later when I saw Luo Xue, I almost wanted to skip it. But I still hope the author will continue writing. The writing and plot are really good.

Chapter 41 is very well written. The military training gives a different ending, with the high-spirited and emotional attitude of young people. It also describes the stability and sobriety of adults. The insertion of the plot is not obtrusive, and the author has put great care into it. Hope it ends! Too many discontinued updates!

When I was young, looking at the broken window was just a "comedy". Years later, looking back, I found it "absurd". Since then, work and life have made me lose the time to "come back", and I can only pick up some fragments of memory in short videos. By chance, encountering this "time", the delicate and true writing and description seem to tear open the "wall" that "we are in youth, but we never have the perception of youth". The fluttering of the new characters does not change the sky, but more like the surprise and understanding of discovering that the scriptures are actually the amorous feelings under Qing's eyes after traveling through the mountains and rivers and finally meeting the Tathagata. The aftertaste remains unchanged and lasts forever, but the "light and shadow" of the writing only fiddles with the "time" a little!

It's awesome. Although I can't say that the writing is particularly good, the plot concept is very good, and the character of the protagonist in the fanfic is also very good. I'm not the type to like the protagonist just because she's a woman. Moreover, the protagonist's personality is excellent, his abilities and emotional intelligence are very high, and his interaction with Lin Luoxue is also very interesting.

It's good-looking, very good-looking. I love it. I didn't blindly follow the plot. There is also falling snow, and some people feel pain.

It is still being serialized and has a rating of 9. ✅The male protagonist is a native. He meets Zhong Bai and his group on the train, and is recognized by Lin Luoxue as the little boy who helped him celebrate his birthday in the hospital when he was a child. The writing is good, and the plot is well integrated. There is no sense of separation. It is slow-paced. The male protagonist Zhou Muye and the female protagonist Lin Luoxue start as friends, and slowly get to know each other and recognize their own hearts.

I like this style of writing very much. I don't know much about AI writing, but I feel that AI cannot write this kind of atmosphere. The advantages and disadvantages are all in one word "light". In fact, I think it is really well done. The warm emotions buried under the plain appearance are very addictive. But if you don't read it with your heart, you will feel that... The story has no ups and downs, and the emotions are not strong enough. But I still hope that the author can keep writing, and I also hope that he can write better and better. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are very solid, and the author has a big heart and does not want to write something vulgar. Regarding novel literature, we have been discussing one thing, which is which is more important, literary or readability? But as far as the current section of online articles is concerned, especially under the framework of Tomato, and the author is a new author with little popularity, I think it would be better to let the literary nature serve more readability for the time being. Although I like the poetic and picturesque feeling of this article, many people cannot appreciate this platform. Each story is well written and I like it very much, but I can't quite find the main thread (in daily writing, I set a short-term goal for the protagonist and then focus on writing a story based on this goal. I always feel that the writing is a bit scattered now. Of course, this is my own feeling) Overall, I enjoyed this novel. The impression of Luo Xue in my heart is that she is lonely, like a piece of ice, even if she wraps herself in flames. I really like the feeling that the protagonist melts her little by little with various details, which is very good. Mr. Lu is an extremely naughty person, and I strongly agree with the protagonist that he should be replaced as the squad leader. He is not suitable for that position. Now that I see this... I really hope that the protagonist can wake him up, even if he suffers a loss once or twice. Zhong Bai, ah Zhong Bai, I hope the author will be merciful... I really hope that she can continue to be bright and cheerful in this book. Come on!

It's really well written. It's the first time I've seen a protagonist with this kind of personality. He's very calm in doing things. It's quite novel to watch it from another angle. I hope I can finish it. Come on

The writing style is quite delicate, and the descriptions and characterizations of the characters are easy to understand. Moreover, I want to fully agree with the meaning of taking photos. It is a book of treasures that I only opened accidentally, but it is indeed very attractive as I read it slowly.

Personally, I like this kind of daily novel very much. Although some friends may look a bit like a running account, the accumulation of emotions among classmates and the daily life close to college life all reflect the reality. This is also the main reason why I like classmates. Compared with the original work, this book has a lot of cuts🔪. It is a very excellent classmate fanfic. I highly recommend [like][like][like][like]