Overnight, I Rose Five Ranks from Staffer

So far, I can score 90 points. The plot is relatively smooth and the rhythm is well controlled. Except for some problems with the characters and some minor cognitive flaws in some plots, there are no big problems in logic, character IQ and plot, and there are no very obvious loopholes. It is still worth reading.

Not bad, but there are too many women. Official documents. At the department level, the relationship between men and women is chaotic. State censorship is hard to live with

The ups and downs of officialdom are well described, and every decision is vivid.

The logic is self-consistent, and the characters are vividly drawn, each with their own differences, which is very good

Well written, keep up the good work

Not bad, come on, author!

Okay, write more about women, your writing is pretty good in this aspect As far as women are concerned, I can see it, but the rest is very average. The main character Ichisan is just like a junior clerk. He doesn't have any power at all. To be honest, it's quite frustrating.

It's a good story, written in a simple, delicate and interesting way. It's very interesting to watch. [Laughing] Good luck to the author!

The structure is clear and the characterization is successful.

I really liked the plot. The ones I watched before started with small characters and gave me a feeling of being in great power. It was quite interesting and not as submissive as in the rural towns.