Pacific Rim: Starting with Hand-Built Mechs

It's rare to see Pacific Rim fanfiction on Tomato, I must survive! [Please update more frequently!]

I'll definitely support anything related to Pacific Rim, even though it's usually quite depressing, and I hate depressing things. But I really enjoyed watching Atlantic Rim 1. Back when I was a kid, after watching it, I looked for something similar and ended up watching Atlantic Rim instead 😂 However, there's a small problem with the setup.

Overall, it's acceptable. The minor flaw is that the movie doesn't show how injuries to the Jaeger affect the pilot, leaving scars; it only provides pain feedback. If there were other feedback besides pain, the protagonist would have died long ago; Gipsy Danger not only had a shattered chest but also a shattered head.

The author put a lot of effort into the beginning, and I was just afraid that the author would quit because of poor performance, so I quickly gave it a five-star review. The author wrote about the Pacific Rim world, the daily life of young people at Tokyo University researching mecha, and the daily life of monster invasion in a very realistic way. If you have seen Pacific Rim 1 and 2, you will feel more immersed in it. Even if you haven't seen them, you will still feel great.

It's a good book, undeniably a good book, but I don't enjoy reading it. Tomato (the author) mostly writes fast-paced novels these days. A few years ago, I would have followed these kinds of books, but now I find them annoying. It's not that I don't understand them; I simply don't like reading these kinds of novels anymore. It's due to my personality, though this book is very well written.

This is absolutely amazing! It's so good, it makes me want to write a Pacific Rim novel. The only downside is that the author can't have more arms and hands to update ten chapters a day, each three thousand words long.

The author demonstrates a keen understanding of the Pacific Rim universe, making reasonable extensions to the original work. The narrative is steady, the details are solid, and the emotional arcs are restrained yet engaging, resulting in a very enjoyable reading experience. Deserving five stars. 👍

It's pretty good, not the best, but definitely top-notch. It's comparable to the original work and you can really immerse yourself in it. Who's the best? The Great Wall Guardian, of course!

Very good fanfiction

Well, the pacing of the first phase was good, but it faltered a bit in the second phase, though it was still generally acceptable. The writing style was also decent. What impressed me most was the author's depiction of the characters' time spans; it felt incredibly natural and even a little heartbreaking (watching the protagonists go from being the youngest generation to being unable to pilot mechs later on). Overall, it's worth reading.