The Naruto Protagonist Is Missing? Then I'll Step In

Maybe if the sense of stealing is stronger and the sense of "immorality" is stronger, it will be better [laughing] Let me tell you in advance that this article is a light-hearted article, not a killing of novels or anything like that. Friends who mind it can avoid it.

Author, I actually like what you wrote. I just lacked some consideration. Hinata, uh, we separated the family. What are you thinking about? Even my biological brother can't escape. You, an outsider, want to change the world. There are dozens of caged birds. Do you still want to fly? I have worked so hard to save only my eldest daughter. I can't save you even if I want to. Don't say you don't look down upon me. It doesn't matter if you don't turn your back on me. If you don't divide the family, you'll stay at home. What are you thinking? This is a military group, not a rural area.

It's quite palatable, the overall tone is relaxed, the protagonist has a gentle personality, and all the beauties who appear in the show are accepted (big thumbs up, all the beauties who have appeared in the show love this feeling, even the beauties who only appeared in a few episodes of the anime are accepted), the male protagonist has also made it clear that he wants to have a harem, which is quite good

The overall strategy process is quite detailed. This type is very rare nowadays, and it is not picky or picky. He talks about wanting to have brain control, but except for the lazy step of adding favorability in the last step (it's good to see this setting too much, otherwise the excessive Shura field would be quite ugly), the protagonist is actually very gentlemanly and respectful towards the harem. He is not worried about his strength and can protect everyone. But Hong has mentioned how to solve the age problem? In the end, are you going to rely on the system to give out a reward of immortality, or is the protagonist developing some kind of life and youth ninjutsu? [Think]

It's really good. At first I thought it had a sexy name, so it was colorful. There was no erotic at the beginning, so I thought it was a bluff. Then I endured reading more than ten chapters, and I couldn't hold on anymore. I endured and read another dozen chapters, and then I found that the boyish feeling was written really well. The protagonist from this angle is also very good. The picture is clear and clean, very good. If you maintain this style of painting and drama, you won't get bored after two or three hundred chapters. I think it's pretty good, it's not poisonous, there's no plot nonsense, it's very natural. To sum up, the plot is good and natural, comfortable to watch, surprisingly good, and the painting style is excellent.

Update soon Author, you have to take care of yourself😭 When I have a break, I write novels [laughs] When I'm hungry, I write a novel😭 When I'm full, I'll write a novel😇 When I'm tired, I write a novel😭 When you feel good, write a novel😇 When I'm sleepy, I write a novel😭 When you wake up, write a novel😇 Write a novel when you cry😭 When you feel excited, write a novel😇 If you lose followers, write a novel😭 After getting a haircut, I will write a novel😇 If you are angry with Party A, write a novel😭 Once Party A gets the rice, write a novel😇 When I stay up late and become bald, I write a novel😭 When you feel radiant, write a novel [laughs] When you run out of inspiration, write a novel😭 After carrying the pot for initiation, write a novel😇 I suspect that I will write novels when I am born 😭 When you are free in this world, write novels😇 I miss my family and friends, so I write a novel [laughs] When relatives and friends come to visit, I write novels😇 Write a novel when you are besieged by keyboard warriors😭 The keyboard warrior writes a novel after being sanctioned😇

Let me talk about the conclusion first. As a typical Naruto fanfic, it is a good novel. First☝️, the presence of Golden Finger is not particularly high, and it does not give people the feeling of overpowering the guest. Second✌️, the relationship drama is not chaotic, it starts from 1 and then spreads. Since it is a harem, it progresses a bit fast, which I can understand Third, the protagonist does not obviously suppress his combat power, and he also eats meat. Unlike some novels, the protagonist is obviously invincible, but he is still a eunuch. There are also shortcomings. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit naive, but this is innocuous for a refreshing article. And what I see now is that Ino's emotional line has stagnated. It should be reviewed. After all, I remember that in the initial setting, he was not old enough, so I was a little afraid to write.

A very standard harem novel [thoughts] In fact, this protagonist is very in line with the characteristics of modern people [Thinking], which is very rare [Thinking] I don't like rating 5. So I gave it 4 [Thinking] For now. Pretty good [thinking] Finally. This book is based on the setting of the Three Body Techniques Shippuden. The stand-in was modified into a blindfold. The substitute technique before the end of Konoha's collapse is set as space ninjutsu [Thinking] I was amused. Just pay attention. When I reviewed it, the rating was 5.8 [Laughing and crying] All I can say is that this book really doesn't deserve this rating. Believe me [laughing and crying] Holy shit. The title of the book is absolutely correct. I do what I say, my nindo [face covering] I thought about it, if I were the protagonist, would I be like him? [Thinking] md, it's not like admitting it, but it's probably similar [face covering] Because the protagonist's character and behavior are very lovable. This is a normal person

It's been a long time since I've seen such a pure harem [Like] Overall it's pretty good

It's okay, but I got really excited later on. I started to let myself go and think about things one by one. When I saw that the situation in the original world was almost settled, it was basically the ending. The sacred lines in the back and the Tsukuyomi line were more like extras. I re-wrote it purely for the sake of recruiting girls. So the first half is quite good.