The Outcast: Night Ink

The first thirty chapters were nonsensical and tedious... Emmm

I think, but just looking at Xu Si's relationship with him is a bit strained and monotonous. Could you add something else? By the way, is the female lead in this post-apocalyptic story paired with Xu Si? Author, please help!

Not bad, very delicate.

Keep it up!! It's really good, just the kind of tentative exploration I like, and it's the Xu Si I understand. Finally, no one has written Xu Si as a pure scoundrel anymore... *Sobs*

Here's a suggestion, honey: the repetition in the performance is really excessive, especially the recurring scenes that appear in almost every chapter. Could you please reduce the amount of repetition?

I'm really looking forward to the female lead's story. I love the emotional and psychological turmoil she experiences with Xu Si. When you fall in love with someone, don't look at what they say, look at what they do! 😳😳

I didn't quite understand it, and it didn't seem to have much to do with the "Under One Person" setting.