After the Yandere Maid Takes Power

Well, this subject matter is really good. Unfortunately, the world view seems relatively small and may not be long enough. There is no psychological activity of the characters (although it is a bit weird to write psychological activities in the third person, but it is almost boring to see the yandere without such a repressed flavor. Although she is the master, she does not need to be depressed). The progress of the two is relatively fast. I am more worried about the subsequent development of the relationship. I am really afraid that the writing will not be long [face covering]

So far, the viewing experience is quite good, overall it is relatively smooth, and the characters have distinct personalities. However, the characterization arc is average, relying solely on words to create the characters, and the character's language logic is a bit weird, and it has a bit of an AI flavor. The incident was handled too quickly, without details, and seemed to be in a hurry. Waiting for future updates…

After reading it, the writing style is really good, but I feel that the writing is a bit rushed and some things in the back are not explained clearly. Compared with the previous writing style, I feel that the state of the writing is a bit down. It is a little regretful that I did not see the daily love between the two at the end [crying] [crying] But overall it is still a good book. I will read the author's new work when the time comes. [Working on the manuscript] I heard that there will be a sequel to The Maid. I don't know if it is true, so let's just look forward to it [Blow a kiss] The maid hasn't even eaten it yet. Hurry up and the protagonist of the supermarket is a wooden bag [poke] All in all, it's well worth watching [Blowing Kisses]

It's a book worthy of full marks. It has just the right amount of yandere, but there are also problems. For example, the plot line is too rushed, and the penultimate chapter smells like a storm is about to come. The last chapter is deus ex machina, and it's written about the market and makes ravioli.

Isn't it my brother that you write so well? Did Wocao really find gold for me? How did you manage to project the characters' emotions into my mind? Author, you are not writing from personal experience, are you? This is the first time I have seen this kind of writing on Tomato that amazes me. After reading the reviews, I also noticed some flaws, but when I read them I ignored them because the emotional lines were so well written. Author, you are a bit biased.

After eating so much, I finally found a big guarantee. It's so beautiful, the author [crying]

Finished reading, good-looking, good-looking [Like][Like][Like] It's a pity that the world view is relatively small. However, if you forcefully write a plot that is beyond your ability and it fails, it will be more gain than gain. The ending of the original text is also very good.

The ending of "Spreading Flowers" [face covering] It can be seen from the content that it is indeed in a hurry. I was so anxious that I changed the setting and many things were not written out (the revenge process, the seizure of power, the emotional content, and I have the impression that there is also a matter of finding the king). If this book at least has If it is more than 1,000 pages, and if the quality of writing remains the same as before the hero's fiancée came out, and if it writes out all the things I said and some things that have not been said, it will definitely be a good book. It's a pity that the author is too hasty. [Facepalm] I left the five-star review. I hope the next book will be as amazing as the first two hundred pages of this novel. (If I say it myself, it's okay for me to copy and paste) If you really want to write about revenge and seizing power, I suggest you watch The White-Haired Kaiser, it's quite good (^.^)

If you have any questions, you can ask them and I will take a look. (˵¯͒¯͒˵) Give yourself a good review first😊

Xianpin is really pure love, very nice.