Why Did the Promised Fair Deal Turn into a Shura Field?

Zhenzhenaiai is my sister, Wanwan is Yun's preference. It's exciting, interesting and not draggy, Qiuqiu is really good. Keaikeai is my roommate, but Susu is the real number one. The cool and old-fashioned squad leader, the little Lingyue is so cute. The little Tsundere is a childhood sweetheart, and Yuyu is such a little Qiaosi. The quirky one is the maid, and the happy one is Yun Wan. Zhiyu is sick and delicate, but he pities his fiancée.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I was more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It showed Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. Luffy and Ultraman had a fight with each other for Rem, and the whole episode was full of light. But Pikachu's skin is indeed too thick. If Yasuo hadn't blocked the 100,000 volts with a wind wall, and then followed it with a steel-cutting flash, this wave of turtle Qigong would have been interrupted. But I care more about Lin Daiyu's line to the Avengers: "Brother Baoyu, are these weirdos wearing leather jackets here to rob the Grand View Garden?", Which shows that Lin Daiyu is unable to come down from flying in the sky in Iron Man 14. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are like being there😘

Campus Sweet Book Review Opening this campus article is like biting into an ice-cold white peach soda candy. It is sweet but not greasy, and full of the unique tenderness and heartbeat of boyhood. There was no bloody entanglement, no deliberate cruelty, just the corridor walking side by side under the sun. The protagonists are clean and pure, and their heartbeats come naturally and sincerely. They show the unique clumsiness and seriousness of young people, their careful approach, and their blatant preference. Between the lines are the most beautiful aspects of youth, gentle, healing, and full of fireworks. After reading it, my heart feels soft and warm, as if I have returned to the summer when the cicadas were chirping and my heart was simple. It is suitable for everyone who wants to be healed by gentleness.

Well written, I love you so much, the author I was wrong, this male protagonist is very ordinary and he always does embarrassing things Why is this Lingyue's speech so ancient? This is so embarrassing, this conversation is so abrupt.

It's quite interesting, but the monitor's classical Chinese writing is very dramatic. Everything else is pretty good, but the apology scene makes me feel a bit like a Japanese manga, but that's all. Maybe it's just a Japanese manga I've been watching recently, so it's harmless.

It looks good. You can wait and see it later before commenting. The male protagonist was good at the beginning but he has this kind of personality. Is the male protagonist Yue tide related to her? Who is the inexplicable male protagonist there? On that section of the mountain climbing, shouldn't we cut it off immediately if something like this happens? And that date, why the date? Aren't you going to fight for inheritance rights? The male protagonist is short of her for a small amount of money. Even if the male protagonist has a bottom line and agrees to others and doesn't want to go back on it, then it should be cut off later. It's really just to force the plot to open a harem. I really feel that the protagonists of this book are all gods, and they are not as normal as a few passers-by. They look like normal people but not like normal people. They are a little god but not that god. They are either gods and gods to the end, or they are more normal. It is really uncomfortable to read this semi-sugar but not sugar.

It's not just me, everyone here is: majestic, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade tree facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiment, super invincible, perfect in one's work, reaching the pinnacle, extraordinary bearing, candle lighting the world, bright. Seeing thousands of miles, rain and dew on the common people, luxuriant vegetation in all directions, dragons walking and tigers walking, heroic appearance, high-rise buildings, benevolent and moral, charming, suave, selfless, looks like Pan An, and is more talented than Song Yu. Virtue is shining, innocent heart, high mountain scenery, high sentiments, great virtues, immeasurable merits, good gold and jade, bright virtues and sweetness, Huai Jin holding Yu, Hui Xin Wan Qi, Yuan Lian Fen Lan, lofty ideals and benevolent people, white cranes in the clouds, magnificence, romantic figures , Fulong and phoenix chicks, unparalleled, unparalleled heroes, extraordinary, a branch of Guilin, a man of cranes, unparalleled, named on the gold list, Kunshan jade, peerless and transcendent, graceful, bright eyes and white teeth, full of energy, looking forward to brilliance, rich and handsome

Let's talk about the advantages first: lightning protection is very good, the female protagonists have almost no physical contact with the male companions, and it is QC, including relationships, for the first time. The descriptions of the various heroines are quite interesting. The male protagonist is not straight like other such novels, and cannot tell the female protagonist's intentions. Disadvantages: Some of the female protagonists are too humble, and the male protagonist is a bit unworthy of his harem. In summary, it is a very good book. The lightning protection and plot are very good. It is suitable for most people to read. (Note: This author really listens to advice. If you think something is wrong, you can try to talk to the author)

This is the best campus novel I have ever seen. It is not slapped in the face by others, cannot afford to lose, or is pretentious. The characters are well created. The character Wenbo is the best character I have ever seen. He is not as good-natured as the suitors in other novels.

To be honest, it's quite interesting. The author himself is trying his best to avoid red herrings and write something that I like to read. The plot sometimes gives me a "??" Feeling, a bit like watching Bilibili. Moreover, the author is very cute, and the book friends are also very cute. I am also very cute and love to read. Please give me more updates from the author. Meow Meow Meow [love] [love] [love]

It's really beautiful. I finished reading it in one sitting. [Pauses face] It's too little and not enough to watch. This writing style is not like that of Tomato. It is much better than those online articles (the characters, scenes and other descriptions are very detailed). It can be seen that the author has writing skills. I also don't know why the rating is so low. It's hard to find anything better than this one with the same theme (Shen Nong finally tasted the elixir and said it was). The descriptions of the heroines are so vivid, I wish it could be a harem, I don't want to see anyone sad or angry. There is just a slight flaw. I think there are too many female protagonists at the moment. There are not many chapters yet, and the female protagonists are already in groups, including sister, Xiyu, maid, squad leader, deskmate, Qingmei, and netizen (this is only possible). This is quite contradictory to the previous description of Xia Yun being ordinary. How can a real ordinary person become a heartthrob inexplicably? 2. The progress gap of the heroine is a bit big. She may have eaten it (sister). She said she wanted to give her a surprise but she hasn't shown up yet (netizen, I don't know if she forgot). 3. Xiyu's love and Lingyue's special treatment are still a bit forced. Shuangwen has a common problem. So why is Xiyu liked by so many people and she remembers it when Xia Yun gave her coffee? Lingyue doesn't accept Wenbo's superiority but gives a chance to the transparent protagonist. There is even a description that says the male protagonist is inferior to Wenbo. It's very strange. It may be because the psychological writing is not detailed enough, and it is a bit difficult to understand the female protagonist's liking (but Su Luochen is very natural). 4. The male protagonist is still a bit useless and feels like he has no opinion at all. Generally speaking, the flaws are not hidden, I hope the author can see it, and I sincerely hope that the work will continue to be good.

The story line is relatively clear, the logic is quite smooth, and the plot design is also very nice. There may be a lack of description in details, or there may be some issues with character creation, resulting in a slightly lower rating. You know, having too many female protagonists is not a good thing. On the contrary, it will only increase the burden, increase the difficulty of writing, and also reduce the enjoyment of the article.

Make it look good(●｀･(ｴ)･´●) Except that the beginning is a bit far-fetched, the description of the character's psychology is okay. The author can create more contradictions and conflicts to make the story more complete and tense. In addition, if the story line is too long, some characters will be left out in the cold. The characters can be more complete, less labeled, and the psychological changes of the characters can be written more delicately. (~^∇^)~

I understand your feeling so well! Next, I will use the words that are the most direct, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least inked, the most poignant, the most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, and the most straight to the point. The least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the least roundabout, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, the most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, The most refreshing, the most powerful, the most powerful, the most enjoyable, the roughest, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the top, the most explosive, the toughest, the fiercest, the sassiest, the most reckless, the fiercest, the crispest, the brightest, the most transparent, the driest, The cleanest, the neatest, the most domineering, the most hard-core, the most vigorous, the wildest, the most straightforward, the roughest, the least pretentious, the least cliché, the least formal, the least fussy, the most talkative, the most focused, the most results, the most truthful, the most core, and the most focused way to tell you: this book is very interesting.

It's quite good to read, there's no brainless plot, and the male and female protagonists are well-shaped. If you don't understand why the female protagonists are so free at the beginning, there are also special memory lines later. In short, it is a good little sweet series of books. Finally, I like you @ Tumiao

The plot is at the level of a normal urban sweet novel. The female protagonists each have their own characteristics and personalities that are easy to remember. The occasional Shura field does not embarrass the male protagonist. The writing is immature in the early stage and clearly found the feeling in the later stage, and the writing is getting better and better.

Yes, there are not so many turtles in this type of novel, and the female characters have their own characteristics, but the male protagonist does not have a character arc. I hope the author can strengthen the shaping of this aspect, otherwise the male protagonist cannot be passively accepted in the later period. The female protagonist should brainwash herself to accept the harem. Especially the harem ending, it is best for the male protagonist to create it himself. Also, the author is very good at describing emotions, but is a bit immature when it comes to conflict, so he can use his strengths to avoid weaknesses.

It looks good, but when the other suitors are offline, and I am curious about the relationship between Wang Zhiyu and the male protagonist, it won't be a plot where they originally liked each other and then separated for some reason.

The content is unexpectedly good. It's a pity that it was suppressed and revised by Tiandao. The early plot unfolds a little bit, what can I say, a bit fragmented and a bit parachute, but fortunately, when the protagonist's memories are told later, there is no such feeling. According to the imagination, the current content and plot are not bad or even very high quality. The book deserves five stars, but the score feels a little low, but I can understand the suppression of heaven. I just wonder if the protagonist will really not become a mummy in the later stage? By the way, the two silly sisters are a bit too local at the moment. The Samoyed character is still quite three-dimensional and lovable at the moment. Higan Hana is on the roadside, is this guy really serious about conquering the protagonist [laughing]

There seems to be something. The writing is very good and very detailed. The author also cares about the readers' opinions. No surprises. If there is anything wrong, I will change it. The front may be a bit dull at the beginning, but it gets better later. I can probably see that it must have borrowed the settings of several more classic IPs. It is quite to my liking [Sending my heart]

I'm not bragging. Everyone who reads this book has a majestic talent, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, a jade tree facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient, reaching the peak, flying sand and stone, miraculous craftsmanship, vibrating. Deaf and enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, sees thousands of miles clearly, touches the rain and dew, and is covered with flowers in all directions. The eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps. He is heroic and majestic, has a high house and a collar, is benevolent and moral, is romantic and selfless, looks like Pan An, is more talented than Song Yu, and a pear tree weighs the sea. Tang, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have a righteous spirit, you have a breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtue, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful mountain scenery, you have good luck, you have a lot of virtue, you have immeasurable merit, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have a good mind, you have a foolish heart, you have a lot of things. , Yuan Ta Li Lan, lofty ideals and benevolent people, white cranes in the clouds, prime of life, romantic figures, dragons and phoenix chicks, unparalleled, unparalleled heroes, out of the ordinary, a branch in Guilin, a man with cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, Kunshan jade

I will write a 500-word post-reading review that is abstract, has a strong sense of atmosphere, and does not directly praise the book. It is literary, artistic, high-end and has a quality, just 500 words. Some words are no longer just symbols on the page from the moment they are opened. They are like a silent tide, slowly flowing through the deserted corners of the heart. This book does not deliberately create ups and downs of conflict, nor is it filled with gorgeous rhetoric, but it has an extremely penetrating power and can easily touch people's most secret and unspeakable emotions. The reading process was like a solitary wandering. I jumped out of the trivial hustle and bustle of reality and fell into the spiritual world created by the author. Every text in the book is a fragment of light and shadow, gentle and sharp, blurring the boundary between reality and fiction. It is not eager to give answers, nor does it forcefully instill truths. It just quietly unfolds the various situations in the world and the folds of human nature, allowing readers to see their own shadows in the blank spaces of the words. It is healing and sobering, gentle and empowering. The emotions and thoughts hidden deep in the text are detailed, long and memorable. After reading and closing the book, everything outside remains as usual, but the inner state of mind has quietly changed. It is like a silent precipitation, quietly calming the inner impetuosity and making the originally chaotic thoughts clear and transparent. Good books are never a one-time pastime, but a spiritual carrier that can resonate repeatedly. This is the case with this book. It catches your eyes when you first read it, and then your heart when you read it. The aftertaste is lingering and lingers for a long time. It is a masterpiece worth collecting and reading again and again. Do you need me to help you fine-tune your tone to be more distant and advanced?

In an era when AI writing is prevalent, it's not easy to find old artists. You can tell from the front that it was hand-written, because the writing is really not that good, but the story is told very well, which completely offsets that shortcoming. This is a very good multi-heroine harem novel that I have read recently. I've been really annoyed by the stories I've been reading lately with multiple female protagonists. They always give away girls. I don't understand why those authors want to write single female protagonists, but also write so many very good supporting female characters who are very ambiguous to the protagonist. But this book is different. At least the introduction says it has it all. The cool thing about stories with multiple male protagonists and multiple female protagonists is that the harem ➕female competition ends together in the end. Rather than the plot of giving away a girl in many novels nowadays, this kind of online article is not a literary work, so why bother with it so much? Isn't it all done now? This novel is awesome👍🏻

Advantages: The characters are vivid, everyone has their own characteristics, the story is attractive, and the length is to the point, without redundancy. In addition, there are a series of thunderous plots such as no gift of a daughter, pure love without a knife, no serious illness, silent dedication but being misunderstood. Disadvantages: It will feel confusing at first. The source of the heroine's feelings for the hero is only introduced in the middle. Why she likes it and some of the pits dug can only be seen later, which leads to a biased perception from the front. However, everyone has their own hobbies, and maybe some people like this method. In summary, just read my five-star reviews and that's it.

The writing is quite good. Compared to his brother controlling Xia Wan, his crush tide Yu, the ancient little creature Ling Yue, and chasing her husband (not sure about the plot), Wang Zhiyu still likes Su Luochen's little classmate the most. After all, she is the most broken one, but it can also be seen that the author sometimes exaggerates too much emotion. Emm, this may have the opposite effect? (I think), but I still like this book. Come on, the author. I can see that he is getting better and better as he writes [Blow kiss]

Qcqs's top quality work, don't miss it if you like to read this kind of stuff. There are no annoying brothers, no business war plots with shark arms, only stories with beautiful girls. Full marks for this rare tomato masterpiece!

Very good, the writing is good, there are no obvious flaws so far, and the portrayal of the heroines is also good. The male protagonist's character is a bit too soft. He needs to become tougher or have an incident to make the male protagonist clear his goals, instead of being neither good nor bad like he is now. The remaining one star will be reserved for the time being. It depends on whether the male and female protagonists tolerate each other and develop harmoniously in the subsequent plot, or whether they will torture each other with a lot of stomachache plots. Okay, not the yw pull type

The squad leader, Lingyue, is an ancient girl, and it is a bit difficult to speak classical Chinese all the time. However, the follow-up of the slightly sickly sweet sister and the girl-loving ex-girlfriend who regrets literature still attracts me. I am a little bit looking forward to the Shura field in the future. However, I think the emotional line of Xiyue is a little bit inexplicable. She falls in love with the male protagonist out of nowhere. Looking at it specifically, there are quite a lot of female protagonists in this article. In addition to the few in the introduction of the book, there are quite a lot, at least 6. After reading it, I don't know what the author plans to write next? In any case, there are no big poisonous spots, you can take a look

I actually like to read Shura Field written by the author [Learned] Maybe it's my personal problem. This harem makes me feel a little uncomfortable. It's a feeling that the hero is distant from everyone. In the first few chapters, he said that he would never contact Wang again, so I thought he was the defeated dog king. However, later on, Wang transferred to the hero's school and hugged each other again. My idea may be to break off the relationship immediately, instead of being ambiguous all the time. In fact, I personally prefer the character of tide Yu, the youthful sunshine. [Learned] The author's outline and logic can be seen very clearly in the article, and I personally think the emotional description of the characters is very good. I hope to continue to work hard [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Trivia, Li Qiu is really not the best. I feel that Li Qiu is the best heroine, but every heroine is my wing. I feel like the male lead is so dazzling that I can't take on the role of the female lead. Meow