The Rival Lane? My Stone-Faced Junior Brother Won't Stop Pouting

I'm going to go, this article is so written, it's awesome. It's so beautiful. I haven't read BL for a long time. I can't help but have a different feeling in my heart. I have to taste it carefully. Is this type of article still my favorite? I go to the teacher, she is my mother, sister, goddess. Asceticism makes me a little irritable. The attack and pain of reading this book also hit my XP hard. OK OS, my soul was shocked to the extreme. This must be my destiny. Oh my god, this cheerful and cold face is simply a rule handed down from my ancestors. I am also blessed to see such an appetizing article. Today, sister Yan, I must evaluate you severely.

Ah ah ah ah Zaozao is simply a god who masters the art of cultivating immortals! The writing is as beautiful as ever! ! ! It's good to see children skipping a grade and taking the Tsinghua University exam🎓, and old people being able to climb trees🌳. This is the antidote to lazy cancer💊, and the trumpet of social fear📢. It makes the old Wangtou at the entrance of the village obsessed with the green flowers next door. I asked for it and got it💘, it was so beautiful that I danced waltz with my aunt at the vegetable market💃, and my tears flowed into the Pacific Ocean🌊. From now on, the earth will no longer be short of water💧, it is like Moutai Flying🍶, it is so beautiful! Come on early! The love between parents is so cute😜The puppy dragon is coquettish and clingy, while Mingxue is cold on the outside and soft on the inside. The character design and CP are full of charm! Qixue is like two injured little beasts, licking each other's wounds and whining. My leopard and leopard cats are in love with each other🥺Qixue 99 can't explain! Xie Qi: He is tough, strong, stubborn, sincere, and has justice in his heart—— Just the best people. Song Mingxue is his friend Xie Qi... Hey, I've been following you since the first chapter. Zaozao I'm going to love you to death [Admiration] From Zaozao's speech: Finally, I support everyone's freedom to discuss the matter, but if you like a supporting character and uncontrollably attack the two protagonists, it happens that the book is not finished yet, and anyone can be written off. Good job early! ! !

This is a rating for the early stage. I picked it up accidentally after reading Sang Biao. At that time, I thought the setting of this book was quite good, and I was the same author as Sang Biao, so I wanted to read it. I probably started reading it from the serialization period of more than 50 chapters, and I really wrote it in the early stage. It's very good, the characters are very vivid, F7 is also very good, I really like it. I still watched it every day no matter how late it was. I really liked it because I was still in school, but I still watched it. I really like the characters of Song Mingxue and Xie Qi. This is for the later stage. Some F7s died inexplicably. Xiao Dan died inexplicably. Shouldn't Lou Zhongbai want the Shan family's technique of rejuvenating dead wood? Why must Xiao Dan's life be taken? Are you saying it's for the main plot? Also, why do you want to post a video of a small order being completed? This really makes me feel a little uncomfortable. Also, why did Lu Feng die too? Some characters are really offline for no apparent reason. And Li Fengzhen, isn't he number one in the world of cultivation? Why not let Lou Chongbai go offline directly? Although he is so powerful, he can't even conquer Lou Zhongbai? So, why give Li Fengzhen such a powerful character? In the later period, it really didn't look like what a leader in the world of cultivation should look like. Let's talk about the protagonist's past life. Writing so much about the past life has resolved the conflict with Jiang Zhou. The rest of it was basically known through barrage. I don't understand the point of writing this? The plot is getting more and more clumsy, and the original character image is completely ruined. There is also Lu Guanlan. Based on his early character design, I don't think he will betray them later. Even if Lu Feng and Xie Qi have conflicting fates, and there are still memory fragments he saw in Ning Shengxue, he just believes it? ? ? ? I believe Li Fengzhen can see this conflict of fates, right? But he didn't say much, let alone wanted to harm Lu Feng... Lu Guanlan's character design really collapsed.

This is for before Chapter 200. Before Chapter 200, it was really good-looking. I often stayed up late to catch up on it. At the same time, the Seven Little Ones were really cute and gave people a very relaxed atmosphere. Qixue in the early stage was really good-looking. The interaction between them and the elders were very good-looking. It allowed me to see the vivid side of each character. Each character has its own characteristics? My favorite is Song Mingxue, he is really perfect, as well as Xie Qi and Lu Feng, I really like their characters, and the author is also listening to our opinions carefully. The early articles are really enough to support five stars, in my opinion After Chapter 200, I don't know how to say it is true. It is very watery. The next chapter will basically have the knives and gags that readers mentioned. Li Fengzhen was clearly portrayed very powerfully at the beginning, so why was he not destroyed by Li Fengzhen after lcb did so? The clan leader was also portrayed so powerfully at the beginning, but what? Just a lcb? I don't know what this is going to do. In the later stage, the plot obviously felt like it was dragging down. There was also Shan and Qi. When they were talking, I really didn't know how they got together. Shan's death later was indeed decided by the author a long time ago, but I really felt weird, and Lu Feng's death. In the later period, lcb killed Xie Qi. Is Li Fengzhen really unable to kill the opponent? Lcb was free and easy, and the protagonist died with serious injuries. I think this cruel point is really unnecessary. It is better to honestly continue the relaxed atmosphere before, which is better than now. There is also the problem of updates. The update time changes every time. Sometimes when I log in early and find that there is no update, the sky falls. If it really doesn't work, you can make the update time irregular. This is better than changing it over and over and being scolded. In fact, if you tell readers, readers will really understand you, instead of just giving empty explanations all the time. Every time something is said, it is either Dy or VB, and a bunch of fans say "I said it in Dy a long time ago..." Etc. It's really troublesome. Can you also do a separate VB issue to explain what happened in Douluo Dalu... Forget it, you have been on the road of confrontation a lot. I wish you a happy life and good health to your parents. I hope you can change your temper after this incident. Goodbye, you should have a good rest. Finally, Qixue 99

This is five stars for the early stage. It was really good in the early stages. I started watching it in February. At that time, there were very few updates, but it was very good-looking and the characters were well created. In order to see the new articles as soon as possible, I often stayed up late to catch up and get the front row seat. The plot of the school is very relaxing, but there are a lot of jokes. The atmosphere between the seven little ones is very good, giving people a very relaxed feeling. Qixue in the early stage is really beautiful, and the author will also ask for manuscripts. I can feel that the author loves his characters very much. The interaction between them is also very warm, making me feel that each character is vivid and three-dimensional. My favorite is Song Mingxue, who is not only good-looking but also has a good personality. He is really perfect and excellent; and Xie Qi, sometimes I feel really cute. The cat and dog sculptures are so delicious. I really like them. I really couldn't watch the later stages. F7's early portrayal was lovable, but in the later stages, many sub-lines were hastily rolled out, and some couples' emotional development was not paved at all. The emotional lines came out of nowhere, and it felt like it was just unbalanced. It was very relaxed in the early stage, but in the later stage it was forced to transform into a heavy and sadistic direction, but the writing power was not enough to control the tragic framework. The character of the protagonist is gradually flattened, his behavior is simply to serve the sad plot, his character charm is greatly reduced, and he hastily ushered in a tragic ending, and his death is inexplicable. Frequent and blunt Internet memes are used to break up the fairy tale atmosphere, and some even directly use sadistic plots conceived by readers. The villain Lou Chongbai's motives are hollow, and he has been committing evil for a long time but has not been punished accordingly. Most of the victims are decent characters, and Lou Chongbai is still relaxed and at ease. This novel could have been a high-quality light-hearted novel, but in the later period it gave up the relaxing and healing tone in the early stage and blindly moved towards a heavy and sadistic route. However, it did not have enough writing power to support the grand tragic framework, and both logic and character were lost.

This is for the first 230 chapters. I think the early stage of F7 was very well done. I really like their friendship. What I like most is that they defeated Xuanlong together in the secret realm of Canglan Academy. I think this plot reflects the charm of the group portrait very well. There is also a plot where they play tricks on Ye Fu and the others. I have watched this many times and it is very interesting. There are also Xie Xiaoqi and Xiao Mingxue, two cute little creatures. The chapters where they go to get Xie Qi's sword together show very well what it looks like to fight against Lu Xiaoqi. My favorite character in Love You is Master Li Fengzhen. What attracts me most is the love between my parents. I have read the chapters where Li Fengzhen lives in Xuanwei Mansion several times. Starting from Xie Qi's death, the character's personality began to fall apart, and F7 also fell apart. Especially when Xiao Dan died, it seemed like he was tortured for the sake of torture, and he died without any preparation. It felt like he was specifically trying to create an image of Bai Yueguang who died early, but the author's writing style failed to hold it up. And I found that the most enjoyable thing about the whole book is the villain. I kept strengthening the villain and introduced the villain and found that it was so exciting. Also, the author gave Li Fengzhen such an awesome identity as the Supreme Human Race, but in the end it seemed to have played no big role. I even suspected that the Supreme Human Race was Lou Chongbai. I also don't understand why the character who stabbed the protagonist in the back can be cleared, but the one who sincerely treats the protagonist ends up with a tragic death. As a reader who is not a fan of Shan Qingyi, I feel sorry for him. After Qingyi died, I originally wanted to give up writing, but I gritted my teeth and read it for the sake of my parents' love. The ending was also very rushed... Oh, but let me just say happy ending. This hatred lasts forever, and I hope I won't hear from you again in the future. Everyone is well, and thank you for meeting me

It's very beautiful. I like the two of them getting along. They are cute. The original protagonists are also very cute and passionate (after all, they are all a group of children). The written text is also very cute and interesting. The first cat sculpture Song Mingxue is a genius. The violent beauty cat is sometimes dumb, and the heartthrob is especially delicious😋The name of the puppy Dragon is also very cute. It has the feeling of a group portrait. It's a pity that there are too few. I am waiting for the update every day. I have been crying this Xiaoxue and the cute puppy Dragon. In addition, I want to know what the crazy sister of a certain ky family thinks, and I am too lazy to scold each one. I particularly like the character of Song Mingxue in this book. The author has made numerous foreshadowings for the fact that he was hurt when he was six years old, so in the third chapter of the book, it is said that he said he did not like contact with others. My first reaction was to feel sorry for him, for his experience, and for his scars. As a result, when I opened the comments, I found that it was a carnival for a certain family. Song Mingxue was hurt when he was six years old, which caused him to have a shadow and didn't like to be touched. We don't know whether the molestation was successful, whether it was because of LTP or some kind of spiritual cultivation, but for a six-year-old child, this is like a lifelong shadow. This is a very scary and painful experience. I don't know the reason for the joking in the comment area, but I know that he has had such an experience and can still say "I'm thinking of lwj", "The last person who said he hated contact with others has been imprisoned without a wife", "It's so familiar, don't you think so lz" (the comment area is full of someone's name), and some even say things like "Looking forward to your slap in the face". You are very vicious, very disgusting, and very cruel, and not everyone likes the person you like. Mentioning other people under this work is disrespectful to the book and the author, and it is also a backstabbing of your favorite characters. When Song Mingxue comes into contact with people later, he will be teased by others, "Don't you like being in contact with people?" (I will scold you once when I see this kind of thing) Song Mingxue will have more physical contact with more people in the future. This is his bravery, not a slap in the face, this is his courage and tenacity to overcome the haze, or I will feel that the greatness of love has brought him out of the shadow of childhood and learned to contact others. This is the joint efforts of him and his lover. Take care of yourself

The confrontation path is great😁 I thought it was another cliche ex-villain script, but it turns out that everyone is a good boy. The three protagonists have a very upright outlook. The group portraits of young people showing off their high spirits are the best! The daily life is heart-warming. At first, I was attracted to the two men, but the more I read, the more I liked it. I didn't want to see them fighting each other due to their differences [crying]. I am looking forward to their subsequent stories. The charm of this book is that it really attracts people into the storyline to feel and experience it. The young man who is so energetic feels like his body is warm. . .

Get out of the way. ! The God of Wen who is in charge of the world of immortality is here! Early early early early early early NB! The only goddess, no one dares to disobey ❤️❤️❤️ I have been chasing every immortal novel. I missed it the day before yesterday. I couldn't help but comment after reading some today (I'm sorry🙏 It's so refreshing. Hey, what kind of fairy setting is this? My old enemy is my wife. 🥳🥳 I can already imagine how shameless this man will be in pursuing his senior brother (bs) 240,000 people. Claes is already awesome. Follow-up review: I added 20,000 in one day and it's 260,000 again. 410,000 In another 5 days😘 550,000 again in 3 days I forgot to remember, it's only about two weeks anyway. 570,000 ， ！ I was sick and hospitalized. Why did I pay 830,000 when I came back? Watching Xiaozao go all the way from Xiaobaihua to now, Xiaozao will continue to walk the road of flowers. Let's look back after a few months. I was a little desperate, a little bit defensive. What happened to you early? No matter who you are, come down from Zaozao.

This is a score for the early stage. The early stage is really good. The characters are full, the emotional scenes are quite good, the atmosphere is relaxed and happy, and the feeling of group portraits really pokes me. Even the supporting characters have their own stories and distinct images. The young couple Qixue is also very sweet. I prefer the plot in the academy. There are too many crises in the front. As long as you go out, you will be in danger. Both of them use their trump cards. I watched the fight very much. The feeling of high-spirited youth is really refreshing. This is a rating for the later period. I feel that the later period is getting worse and worse. In all the novels I have read, when it comes to the final battle in the later period, especially when someone in the protagonist group has died, without exception, the atmosphere is basically heavy, urgent, or the fight is very exciting. This is the first time I have seen it. The war is about to begin, and people have died, but the atmosphere can still be relaxed and happy, and the protagonist group can still be happy because of some small things. What's more, the situation is very critical, very urgent, and it is about the life and death of the human race. The protagonist group can still be happy because of some small things. Should I say that the protagonist group is big-hearted or something? , It didn't feel immersive at all. The description was very strange. What should be focused on was her non-serious description, but she wrote a lot about some daily small things. It was finished immediately. Why waste so much ink on describing it? Especially in this way, it is really difficult to give people a sense of urgency for the decisive battle. Then the author said that it is still It will be finished in about 10 days, but I feel that there is obviously a long section of the current plot that has not been described. If it is finished so quickly, the later plots will go by very quickly. The important plots go by so fast, but there are many daily ones, which is obviously unreasonable. Moreover, I feel that Shan Qingyi's death and Lu Feng's death are very different. It's inexplicable, there is no foreshadowing, he died inexplicably, and Lu Guanlan, I feel that he is dead immediately afterwards. I don't think he will harm Xie Qi just because of his fate, let alone collude with Lou Chongbai. I can't fight Shan Heqi, I feel that there is no sense of CP at all, this One of the reasons may be my own, and the other is whether Shen Jianwei's role is too much. Even a supporting role has more roles than her. Ning Shengxue's role, no one, and more stories than Shen's, and in the later period, Li Fengzhen did not have the momentum and strength of being the best in the world, how well he was described in the early stage How awesome, how powerful, but in the end, it didn't feel very powerful at all. I understand that the author is not in a good state due to abuse and family reasons, but if he is not in a good state, he should rest instead of continuing to write. I can also understand that the author does not want to let down the sincerity of the readers, but the quality of the writing is poor. It will decline, which is inevitable. If the quality declines, some people will definitely be dissatisfied. There is no way. I still hope that the author can adjust the status quickly or stop updating first. As long as the previous quality can be restored, I am still willing to wait. Why does it show that I have only watched it for 3 hours?