The Outcast: From the Start, I Get Aizen's Hogyoku Template!
一人：开局获得崩玉蓝染模板！
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 239k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
90Chapters
11Reads
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I don't know what kind of hook he is planning. He is obviously invincible, but he is still pretending to be planning something.
It's confusing, and there's also a problem with the protagonist's name. It's impossible for Zhang Zhiwei of this generation to accept someone with such a name as his apprentice.
There are a lot of mistakes. I traveled through time and was still called Sosuke Aizen. Do you know the background of the story of Under One Person? That thing fought in the War of Resistance. Secondly, even if Aizen himself comes through again, he will not cultivate another big daddy. He still wants to put Bengyu on Feng Baobao. Do you want to see what is written?
It's barely readable, but the author's book is too messy. First, the protagonist is a time traveler, and then his identity is the apprentice of the old master, and then he awakens the memory of Death and obtains Bengyu and Xuye Palace. However, this book makes the protagonist Aizen. You have to understand that you are the protagonist, a time traveler, who just awakened Death's golden finger. Don't imitate Aizen's role. You should live your life, not others, otherwise it will be boring.
AI article, a garbled book, just a few contents, the chapters are confusing, just organize the Luotian Dajiao twice, once the protagonist did not participate, and the second time the protagonist participated!
It's either AI or obscenity, anyway, it's just a piece of shit
A little messy [what] [what]
AI article, and it's very rubbish AI
Although it's a bit messy, it's very Aizen's character.
I don't understand what 22 and 23 mean? How come one thing is described twice? Written by AI?