Harry Potter: Why Is the Snake I Raised Getting More and More Strange?

There are not many words, but it is still very good to read. The magic potion formula and collection method are very interesting. Sisi and Snake are really two little bitter gourds, and Irene is as annoying as ever. It was different in the early stage. Si entered the Yingyuan last. I feel that now I prefer Si and Snake's single player, which is good and not so troublesome. You can take a look. Come on, teacher.

The theme outline is quite interesting. The main character enters the Yingyuan and has been well received. There are also newly opened lines other than the original work that have been well received. But the fact that trouble comes to my door makes me imagine that if you are a mortal cultivator, someone will always find trouble and then you have to fight monsters to upgrade. The AI ​​style is a bit obvious. AI can be used to assist, but some obvious sentence patterns still need to be changed.

It's a bit bland, but the introduction is quite interesting and the writing is not childish. But from the first chapter to the present, the tone of the real questions has been very flat. The dialogue between attack and reception is a bit artificial, without passion or nicotine. On the contrary, Lily always appears after entering the academy. Usually she looks at Sif with worry. Sif looks at her sincere eyes and cannot bear to refuse and wants to stay away because of her sincerity... Well, currently, Sif, Snake, and Lily have a male protagonist (Xi) with an assistant (Snake) to conquer the world, and the female protagonist (Lily) is always worrying at the back.

It's okay, but it feels a bit too bland. If you want to watch the plot, don't enter if it's more exciting. The author's personal setting is that after the father died, the mother cheered up and opened a shop (magic shop). I'm not very interested in the back part. It's bland. If you like warmth, you can enter. The interaction between Sif and the little snake was quite interesting, but I didn't watch the latter part. There was a bit of abuse in the first part (mainly due to the harm caused by his father to Sif and the frustration he encountered when he failed to gain a foothold in school). Sif is a Ravenclaw school (the author's private company). If you are interested, you can watch it.

Tips for lightning protection in the front row: quite OOC and bookish (points are deducted for this) The setting of Hogwarts is also very bookish, but OOC is originally from the original generation, so it is understandable. Highlights of this article: The plot arrangement is quite innovative and can be regarded as a Western fantasy adventure flow (Forbidden Forest Edition) with familiar protagonists and NPC names. Basically there is no original route, but it is really beautiful)

Very warm writing style, daily and good-looking, not too many ups and downs, most of the time it is dull, but it is really touching, and makes people's hearts warm after reading it. The two people depend on each other, help each other, and recognize their emotions. They are beautiful together, there are no bloody misunderstandings, not abusive, super invincible and beautiful, warm little cookie, you deserve it

The plot of the story was well written. Severus went to sell potions and buy some things. He was in the body of a child? Also, can the part where Lily goes looking for potion ingredients be found in the Muggle world?

The search for various potion materials is very detailed. I like the feeling of improving magic and look forward to the subsequent development [Send heart]

Very good, very good. If you like reading daily stories, I can recommend it. This book is a bit biased toward daily life, and the two people hug each other to keep each other warm. The kind of redemption is very good. I still recommend it.

The relationship between Snape and Theran feels very warm, and their theories about the magical world are also very organized. It's great, great, and I look forward to their future life [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart], good luck to the author! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]