HP: The North Star Falls

It's really good to watch. The plot is the most reasonable among the fanfics I've read, and the character creation is also very touching. In the previous life, the protagonist's love for Snape was like a baby bird, and the collapse after being betrayed. In the new life, he treated the professor and surrounded himself with thorns. The protagonist himself did not realize the core of his complicated emotions for the professor. The warmth wrapped in the darkness in the previous life, his careful admiration, and his inability to discover the truth. Do you hate it? Love? Regret? The protagonist's struggle in the chaos of the world and his unwillingness to hate the injustice of fate are vividly described. The key is that the writing is really good!!!! Come on, teacher 😘😢

First of all, the author writes very well, and the protagonist's experience, background, character, and growth are all very well portrayed. However, after reading it, I feel that the protagonist really expected and broke the seal of SS in his previous life. In this life, he is sincere to SS and takes advantage of SS. He hates SS very much and only steps on SS to hurt his feet. Personally, I came here for SS. It may not be suitable for me. Goodbye, I wish the author better and better.

This ending is very in line with the character, and it is a wonderful ending, but I was a little bit disappointed when I read it. Every time I read a novel about a professor, I always want to find a life that will allow him to have a better and warm life. Thank you, the author, for giving me another blow.

Invincible, I actually came across a novel in Tomato that I need to read word by word slowly. It is so well written. Although there is no score, it is worth 9.5 Or above. The only drawback is that it seems to take a lot of effort and is quite tiring. If you lose your focus even a little bit, you have to go back.

I feel that the emotions described by the author are particularly delicate, and the writing style is also very good. It not only shows the ambition and intelligence of the protagonist, this will make people feel particularly touching, and I will keep reading! 😘😘

Very well written, highly recommended

The teacher's writing is great! I think the arrangement of the protagonist's team is very interesting. I haven't seen such a HP article in a long time. Come on!!! I've saved a lot and I'll see if it goes up! Both sides of the emotional line have changed a lot! Looking forward to the teacher's next update, it's very interesting, please update it more!!! Ovo

Awesome, it just feels like a knife stabbing your heart. In the early stage, there is a beautiful feeling of self-destruction at any time. Please give me a sequel. This ending is so cruel [I almost cry]

It's really, really well written, with a lot of details taken care of.

A good work with soul, weight and warmth