Help! The Magical Girl I Raised Has Turned Evil

Very interesting to write. A pretty good book. It feels like the protagonist is the Emperor sitting on the golden toilet, the S+-class magical girl is the original, and the three witches are the traitorous Horus. Centaur, golden ring, thirty years, first return son Thinking of Huangquan, thoughts are flowing like a fountain!👊😭👊 Read the Imperial Sword! Never forget it!🗡😭🗡 Royal Dutch Palm! Life after life!✋😭🤚 After thirty years of solitude, my son returns for the first time!😡 The most unforgettable gift, the centaur ring! 😍 Ullanor's canonization, Imperial Warmaster!🤤 The Emperor loves me, I love the Emperor! 🤪 Impossible, how could the Emperor only regard me as a tool? Absolutely impossible! Gua—Father, I love you so much—woo woo—wow croak—ah ah—hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee! Let the galaxy burn! 👿

There is no poisonous point at the moment, the emotions are portrayed very delicately, and it deserves five-star praise Haochi [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy] Damn, it was poisoned in the back. The protagonist was afraid that the other heroines would find out, so he pretended to be an old man. One of the heroines jumped up and sat on her belly, and then he felt her heartbeat before she recognized it. Mask Lei

The food cooked by the teacher is really delicious. The protagonist's character does not (fw) have such a gap from strong to weak. The setting is not toxic (in my opinion). The story line is very good so far. I look forward to the author's subsequent posts!

If your guess is correct, this book should be based on "My Ex-Girlfriends Are All Witches". After all, I saw that the core structure and even the essential plot are exactly the same, but it is not bad, because I think it is a very good and beautiful book (even though the author is a eunuch). However, when I read it, I always compare the writing style of the two books, so I can't give it full stars now, but I will continue to watch it! Let's see how to [learn] first

The rating of the book has not yet been released. In my opinion, it is a pretty good magical girl novel. The background is quite technological (similar to continent), not traditional and modern. The image created so far is quite good. Good luck to the author, five stars for encouragement.

Interesting, so interesting, quite good. You are one of the few people I have seen who writes about the modern harem of magic so fluently. Bro, I like you very much.

Emmm, I just finished reading chapter 101. The creation of various yandere characters seems to be very good, and the description of Shura Field is also very good. It is not the kind of Shura Field without conflicts. As for the overall plot, I don't think there's much of a problem (this may vary from person to person.). There is also the AI ​​issue that has been discussed in the comment area, but it actually feels hard to see. Personally, I think it's pretty good food so far. The character positioning of Sha Meng has returned to the original concept of a yandere. This is how it should be written. It's so cool. There is also the iron-blooded male protagonist (the ultimate fourth natural disaster). At present, it seems that the main plot is to slowly influence the male protagonist to become an xp party or a pure love party (), at least with a little bit of humanity. There are currently 172 photos in progress. The emotions of the heroines are portrayed very well. The emotion of the gravity system is very, even 9 points sweet. Instead, it gave me the feeling that the protagonist was playing with emotions, being condescending and unworthy of such sincere emotions. I really have to thank the great Three Witches, otherwise these six Gundam Team would probably become the next batch of Three Witches. Looking forward to the transformation of the protagonist. (One additional point. No wonder the score is quite low. The protagonist does seem a bit too arrogant. But it feels like it's just because his identity hasn't been revealed yet.) Update, the current progress is chapter 213. Sure enough, after the identity is revealed, the early perceptions have improved a lot. (Additional explanation, I had a flash of inspiration and felt that the protagonist's situation is a bit like Kelsey in Arknights)

It's very beautiful. There's nothing toxic about it so far. I just like this kind of Shura field. The heroine's character description is also very good. The only drawback is that there are a little few chapters, but the author does make up for it by updating 2 or 3 times a day, so I'll support it with 5 stars.

It's so exciting. Although the previous description of the protagonist's company's strength is not very good, a large company that has already dominated the world is being troubled by a cult on its own territory. Especially the incredible security personnel, who also blocked the protagonist from entering. But the foreshadowing of the protagonist's identity later is really interesting. The last few pictures talk about Katya's lover, who is similar to the protagonist, and Katya is very similar to Anna. This means that the protagonist is similar to the savior in Ming Chao who keeps losing his memory, making new friends, and saving the world. And are the current six witches basically the same witches that the protagonist died in before? Combined with what the three witches said now, the protagonist was spliced ​​together. Then his materials should have been collected before the protagonist lost his memory. This can also be related to the success of the protagonist's current company mentioned many times before, which is a foreshadowing of the achievements of previous generations. I will finish writing this book honestly, put away the pitfalls of foreshadowing, and then write a few more chapters to talk about later. Sort out your world view and go directly to the starting point. The combination of magic and reality, as well as those twisted characters, I think are quite lacking in starting point these days. If there is a female protagonist, it is best not to have more than 7 themes of this kind. I mean above the starting point. Tomato still has the same female protagonists, plus the three villains as witches

I've read half of it. It's nice and interesting. I haven't read such a comfortable book for a long time. It's particularly good to write it completely around the title. The words are all about the yandere and dark expressions of the heroines. As for some game management and background, I also like it briefly, but I'd better write a little more to enrich the content. The only shortcoming is that the portrayal of the heroines is still not perfect. The characters are all likeable, but they do not reflect the degree of obsession after being blackened. Simply put, there is too little description of the past. This is the case for Lin Mu, Chloe, and Anna. As for the past encounters, acquaintances, falling in love, and parting, it is described in a few lines. I think this part should not be abbreviated. It is completely possible to write one chapter for each heroine's past encounters, and several chapters for each heroine's gradual falling in love. The confusion and heartache when they were separated. Write a chapter about the final darkening process, so that the emotional outburst when we meet again five years later will definitely be stronger and more beautiful than now. This will make the contrast between the characters stronger and make people feel more comfortable. Lin Mu's shaking, Chloe's docile side, these are all. As for Shura Field, I think there is nothing wrong with the writing alone, but the core is the problem mentioned above. Without foreshadowing, the conflict will make people feel a little abrupt and the smell of gunpowder is not so strong.