A Mortal's Path to Immortality: An Ancient Pagoda from the Start

What an adorable writing style! Even a clay figure has three parts fire. When something was lost using a secret, the first thing that came to mind wasn't whether the secret would explode, but whether the wealth had been stolen. It wasn't until the villain reminded her that she realized what had happened 😄😄. She's such a cutie.

There are some minor flaws, but otherwise it's very good. If there are more than three unforgivable flaws, I'll deduct one star. It reads smoothly, and the plot develops well, but there's one thing: after 280 chapters, it's still about Qi Refining, and are all the Qi Refining characters really that strong? They all look so arrogant, which is quite impressive.

The author's writing is very good; thank you for your desire to continue reading.

The opening scene sets up suspense, and while it somewhat repeats the old revenge trope, the constant conflicts and growth he encounters are well-written and have few plot holes, making it a good work among cultivation novels. Hopefully, the author can maintain this level and end the story within 500 words.

I've listened to 200 chapters already. The story is great. However, the multi-character intelligent reading voices are no longer available in the later chapters, and the other voices sound unnatural. I'll listen to more chapters after letting them rest for a while. I'm listening to it for the second time now.

Keep up the good work and strive for even greater success.

It's incredibly good, captivating, full of suspense, and I couldn't put it down!

This is a great and interesting article; I couldn't put it down and it's definitely worth reading.

It's also super pretty! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Hehehe, I came from Lin Xiaofan, keep it up!