At the Foundation, Hoping to Contain a Dragon Girl

It's a good rare MTF mobile task force perspective, but after more than 50 chapters, it's almost 60. Where is the Dragon Lady? Dragon Niang, Dragon Niang, Dragon Niang, Dragon Niang, Dragon Niang [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

The rare mobile task force perspective is well written. It also has the author's unique document-style chapters, which completes the setting to a certain extent, and also has some explanations of SCP. It is a rare SCP masterpiece, and I am waiting for updates. [Please update]

The writing style is acceptable and the writing is smooth, but the beginning needs to be improved. It is not very attractive. It is relatively disadvantaged in Fast Food Tomatoes. I personally recommend writing the gimmicks as early as possible to attract readers' interest. For example, using flashback techniques, first write the plot of the mock test to attract readers first, and then explain the causes and consequences. So far, it is not bad. I will give it a four-star rating first and wait for me to taste it😋 The encounter with the Dragon Lady was a bit awkward to write, and the emotional scenes and character description techniques still need to be accumulated. It was a very bland, cliche and even absurd encounter with no characteristics. When the dragon appeared, it was completely out of place and frightened the god. The mystery created by the title collapsed instantly. I don't deny that the setting of the authority can be very powerful, but at least it can maintain a sense of mystery and A strong feeling, for example, you can ban people first, put some kind of secret realm for the protagonist, powerful combat units cannot enter, and a series of stories such as encounters when exploring and solving abnormalities, etc., Are more ups and downs, unlike several dragons in the article who just kneel down as soon as they appear, are collected and then disappear. You can refer to a book called Although I Can't Contain is a funny and light-hearted article, it still has the sense of oppression and mystery that it should have [face covering]

Not bad, not bad. I have found a novel that appeals to my taste. There are no problems with the setting. The story is also good. I hope the author can speed up the update. It is not enough to read [Love][Love][Love]

I forgot to review the book, I'll make it up The following is the number of water characters (?): A long time ago, in a warm and prosperous tidal prison, there lived three happy rats. The Rats have no names, but the operators call them "Lao Den", "Brother Shield" and "Haki Bee". There are many, many operators living in this map, but they never quarrel or fight. Everyone lives a happy and free life together. The Rats hope that the prison will always be harmonious and stable, and they also hope that more operators will come to play in the prison. Visited this peaceful place in full costume. He is a fierce attacker and a big shot. But other than that, he is nothing. The man in full costume wanted to enter the prison, but the rats thought he was suspicious and refused to let him in no matter what. Quan pretended to be angry, and before leaving he said: "Soon, disaster will come to this core area. This place will be infiltrated by evil and sin, until the terrifying Liu Tao devours everything! The shared prison will never restore its former harmony!" The Rats were in distress. What if it's really like what he said? So they decided to become prison guards. They love this core, they want to protect the operators in the prison and maintain peace Lao Deng, who has a surveillance camera, monitors the lock house looking for intruders. Lao Deng's eyes can see far away, and can even see things we can't see. But someone said: "What if Liu Tao appears at night?" Lao Deng was very worried, so he burned all his haf coins and made a mechanical bird that would never be destroyed. Now, the operators in the prison are all under Lao Deng's supervision. In order to maintain peace in the prison, Brother Shield judges the sins of the operators. Its shield can measure any crime with absolute fairness. But someone said: "What if the shield does not tilt to any side?" Brother Shield was very worried, so he made the shield only tilt to one side, so that no matter who was judged, there would be a result. The Hakibee decided to use its hormone shots to punish the erring operators. But someone said: "The damage of your hormone injection is too low, no one will feel pain." Hakibee was very worried, so it installed accessories on the 14 it picked up, turning it into a fully modified gun that can melt anyone. Horrible rumors began to spread outside, and no one wanted to go to prison anymore "No one is free there, Lao Deng has been monitoring the operators on the periphery!" "The shield dog's trial is not fair at all!" "The bee doctor's punishment is terrible!" The mice are angry. We are obviously working so hard to protect the prison, why are we spreading such rumors? Fewer and fewer people come to the prison to play, and there are fights everywhere in the core area. "Sigh... This core is too vast, we can't protect it by ourselves! "If we combine our strengths, maybe we can become stronger." The day Old Den's mechanical bird that could see hundreds of miles away, Shield Brother's elbow attack that could judge any sin, and Haki Bee's full modification 14 that could kill all operators in seconds were combined, disaster struck. Seeing the rat, the operators screamed in horror, and the prison suddenly fell into chaos. Amid the noisy cries and frightened screams, someone shouted: "It's that Liu Tao! There is a terrifying big Liu Tao in Tidal Prison! "

It's so good-looking, Dragon Girl will be released soon (I've got a draft of it). Come on, big brother who writes about Dragon Lady!

It's good to watch, but the Dragon Lady appears too late. If you're anxious, you can skip watching.

It's a good book that doesn't require much explanation. It has special explanations and can be read by SCP novices.

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So far, there's no big problem. As long as it's not unfinished, I'd say 8.8 Points. Besides, I want to see some training😋