Warhammer 40K: I Become an Angel in the Battle of Baal

The writing is excellent and in line with the history and major events of the Warhammer worldview. The author is not a Hammer, or at least has written many official novels/plots, so check the information carefully. The opening scene is extremely stunning, and the angel's action of saving his heir brought me to tears; there is no brainless villain, and the male protagonist also has his own charm and IQ.

I would like to make a suggestion, I hope the plot can flow a little smoother, and don't let the whole dream happen at every turn. Live a new plot. As a reader, sometimes this connection can be a bit uncomfortable. The main storyline goes a little smoother. Let's have less inexplicable exchanges. Can we get past the main plot? There is a kind of walking where a red light suddenly comes and you will be delayed for a long time. There is no need to ponder a scene from Zhuang Zhou in Butterfly Dream. Let's just live the plot normally and not explore the soul a little bit. This is so uncomfortable.

There are relatively few people writing Warhammer novels, which is pretty good. Personally, don't criticize me.

I live up to it... Wait a minute, I'm not Angel-chan's son

So far it looks pretty good, there's nothing bad about it. Author, please keep it up and don't give up. Comment again if there are any changes later. Looks good, keep it up ()

Visit the bookstore in the early morning. Mouth teeth! This is so beautiful! Mouth teeth! Come on, author, update your mouth! Why don't you update it? I really like this theme [cry] [cry] Author I miss you so much.

It's quite cute, and the writing style is quite delicate [I understand][I understand]

Come on, don't break suddenly

Don't be fooled by the name, it's a rare Warhammer 40k fan book

In fact, it would be better if the protagonist is a local. After all, the performance is completely different from that of a time traveler, more like a local Blood Angel?