Warhammer: I Became the Erased Second Primarch

Not bad, this is the second book where I see the protagonist Primarch being adopted by Erda. Really, the character of Erda is quite difficult to write. There is still little information about him and his personality. Yes, the author has a question, that is, should the protagonist create his own independent camp? After all, the empire cannot go back. Should the protagonist create his own path and create his own empire or other types of countries outside the galaxy?

It's a very good start so far, but I don't know what will happen next. Then the name of the holder of the seal, the Prime Minister of the Empire, was written incorrectly in the book: Malcador. Also, don't spend a lot of words writing about how much Erda loves the Second Primarch. You can write it, but it shouldn't be too long and don't cover every chapter. It should speed up the growth of the Primarch and the development and construction of the planet.

1. How to solve the problem of intelligent robots being contaminated by subspace old tiles? (Of course, the big cracks in the 30K era have not yet appeared, and subspace pollution is not yet that strong) 2. Are the Space Marines bred by pregnant mothers natural persons or clones? It seems that two years is not enough for the Space Marines bred to undergo nineteen genetic modification surgeries. I suggest the author find out more. 3. Each original body has unique characteristics. Is the protagonist's characteristics perfect and currently showing good adaptability and no genetic defects for the time being? 4. Each Primarch is a sub-god of subspace and has the essential characteristics of subspace. What are the essential characteristics of subspace of the second Primarch (is it perfect)? 5. For Warhammer articles, the author of Warhammer 40K Doom can learn from it as a starting point.

Maybe I should give a one-star negative review, maybe I should give a two-star average, maybe I should give a three-star average, I should maybe give a 4-star positive review, and maybe I should give a five-star positive review.

In Warhammer, we should be idealistic, return choices to humans, and pursue true freedom. We can only say that the current scale is still small and feasible. As long as the scale is expanded, it will definitely be over. The foundation of Warhammer has been laid in the Battle of Heaven. Tens of millions of years of accumulation has become a super cesspit. The protagonist is currently building on the cesspit. It is only a matter of time before the villa collapses. Human beings are half black and half white. Sooner or later, the black side will explode. When the time comes, it will be completely destroyed. Humanity alone will be dead. Moreover, for ordinary humans, the Four Gods can really ignore the will and make people die and twist. This is just a question of whether the Four Gods are willing to increase their investment. It can only be said that the protagonist is not big enough, either he has other world's technology and directly maims or kills the four gods, or he becomes a god himself, has his own territory in the cesspool, and pollutes human beings into his own shape, or the author ends up cheating. In short, everything depends on the author's settings (these are my judgments after reading many Warhammer-related novels and videos, such as Starting Point, In the Name of Nirvana, Mortal Gods, etc. Please understand if there are incorrect judgments, and don't scold me if you give five stars)

It's pretty good. It's not about the emperor. In the book, the emperor is self-willed and has his own opinion on everything. The King of Darkness has confirmed it.

The perfect original body is very good. After pressing it for 100 million times, I haven't reached the later stages of sensibility.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's great, cheers author!

It's just that the content is a bit lacking.

Very nice, I suggest you update it soon

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I'll give it five stars first, I'll check it out later.

I've read Chapter 18 so far. It's good and I like it very much.

The previous chapters have a bit of a light novel style of writing.

I just read the first 20 chapters, they are very detailed and the characters have a rich feel [laughs]

In fact, it is quite consistent with the original work.

You can still write well, keep it up＾0＾~

Very cool, the future is promising

It's not bad, it's pretty good among Warhammer or Warhammer 40K texts.