I Became a Beta Tester for a Paranormal Game

My evaluation is that the food is edible. The biggest problem with the novel is similar to the problem common to most horror films. Including but not limited to, If I find something unusual, I'm not sure, so I won't say anything. When he discovered the abnormality and told it, because he was a supporting character and only he saw it, no one else believed it. If you find something unusual or something you don't understand, just don't ask it and just think about it by yourself. When you find a problem, there are materials left by your predecessors. If you don't read it, you have to practice it yourself. Wait for a series of common logical problems in ordinary horror movies. If that's acceptable, this novel is still okay.

It's tied, I feel it's okay, it's a cool story anyway, there aren't any disgusting supporting characters, and there are all kinds of plot lines that make your blood pressure rise. One star is deducted because the protagonist hides his abilities, and you're not sure if you can survive, and what he's hiding, and it's not exposed in the end.

The plot and writing are 4 stars. I'll give it 5 stars because the subject matter is interesting. Tomato is still a popular theme recently, wearing the so-called game world. The main reason is that the power system is interesting, and it's more like a Feng Shui master and weird. Overall it's watchable. The subsequent promotions are relatively fast, and it takes a few years of hard work for the aborigines to advance to a higher level. However, considering the needs of the subsequent plot, it is impossible to understand that it is impossible to write too much space in a small place.

It's not bad for me. I really want to watch it but feel uncomfortable. Pretend to be mysterious, you can ignore it, or the Spring and Autumn writing style must be written out, eh, but it doesn't solve it. The problem is big and mysterious, but I am also very mysterious about this aspect, the aspect of making a positive out of a negative. Discover a problem and something is wrong Classic horror movie, "Maybe I saw it wrong", discover a problem, pretend to be mysterious and don't say anything. It had to be resolved or spoken out. There is a feeling that I am setting a foreshadowing here so that you can easily see it, but if I don't tell you, I won't solve it, and you will know what to do later. It's written like the protagonist is watching others die, but in fact it's not the case. Why did you write it like this? Because of the difficulty of expression, can the protagonist just pretend to be mysterious?

The writing is very good. I have read Chapter 93 so far, and I feel that it has a relatively grand world view. From now on, I feel that Earth Master, Celestial Master, Breatharian, Mountain Patroller, and Water Guardian each have their own characteristics, and there are more possible professions. There is a lot of room for expansion in the future. In addition, the events encountered now are all different, from Corpse Mountain - Walking Corpse Mountain - Locked Dragon to Tianyu, the plot development line is relatively clear. But I feel that in order to quickly enter the heavenly realm, the protagonist was promoted a little too fast in the early stage. I think the human plot can actually be a little more. Du Xunsheng was still a walking zombie at the beginning, but he became a supporting role in the next scene, a little faster [laughing and crying] The author's description of the big scenes can be more detailed, and the current dialogue and fighting feel dry hhh

It's really wonderful, it directly creates a new track, but I don't know why it gives me a feeling of emptiness [what]

Super Invincible is a wonderful and special world, especially suitable for readers who like a huge world view. It outlines a very interesting world view, and the content of the novel is relatively compact and looks very interesting.

Be encouraged! It feels like the game has come to reality or it is the same world but the timeline is different. But I really like this world view. It is about mountains, rivers and terrain. I especially like this world view. Mountain rangers, earth masters, and heavenly masters. So far, the risk defense mechanism in the game world is very complete. I just don't know if I will take the path of learning in an academy in the future. If I go, it will feel a bit too samey. Moreover, there are so many chaos in this world that there is not much time for the protagonist to learn. Big cheers for the author! [Blowing a kiss] Update soon! ! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's a pity, obviously the temperament of the article has changed after changing the map. The author probably can no longer write the original map.

I think it's very interesting. The world view is a bit novel. The narrative development is not laggy. The writing is smooth. The protagonist develops at the fastest speed. He has entered a new map and is the protagonist of the lawful camp. I'm just curious about what's going on with the chains in the mountains of the real building. The author will update soon.