Honkai Impact 3Rd: Offering a Beautiful Yandere to the Honkai World

T1 level writing, don't ask why it's not T0, because T0 is in the miHoYo writing team. Basically, there is nothing sinister about it. I haven't read a novel in a long time, and I was so excited when I read it! If I want to write better and longer in the later period, then let the storm come more violently! ! ! I want to see a river of blood! ! ! ! ! Didn't I tell you that there is healing and warmth in the dam?

A relatively good fan novel [Send Heart], the writing is good, but the plot still needs improvement, and the slow progress makes it feel too draggy (that's how I felt anyway). Everything else is fine, I hope it can speed up the relationship between the heroines [cool]

It's so delicate. The protagonist is not just a strategy machine. He behaves like a normal human being and likes others normally. If the author realizes his mistake, he will correct it

The author has written the yandere that I really want to see. It's too gravity-defying [laughs evilly] and it's too strong and mouthy! ! ! Can the protagonist be strengthened? He is a bit impatient. His ribs were broken after being elbowed by Kiana (Kong Lu) [Eat melon]. Moreover, the protagonist will comfort himself before each simulation that "it's just a part-time job." Can the rewards be richer? [Please update] (The following personal perception contains spoilers, my expression may be one-sided, so read with caution) Yes, author, the Heavenly Vault chapter describes the real sufferings of the Honkai series and the inner struggle and fear of the protagonist on the way to becoming a savior, instead of the clichéd harem of Honkai Impact. I look forward to your follow-up plot. I just hope that Mei Zhaole is not so tight, and at least it is for those who are selected to become the savior. The middle simulation chapter is in a calm daily life, and Kiana instantly opens the Immortal Sky Law form to the protagonist and shoots the Archon Spear. Mei Zhi wanted Kiana not to hurt the protagonist, but in the end, he opened the Thunder Law instantly. The spear of the Archon that struck Mei Zhao's body incidentally made the protagonist scorched on the outside and tender on the inside. Then Jiuxiao reacted again and said, "I can save anyone." No, it's all my fault. In this case, let's just sink together. I also threw one skill at Mei Zhao, Lei Lu and Kong Lu. When I watched it, I was so confused [face covering] that I did a crazy thing to the protagonist, the legendary backstab king.

Just looking at the title, I thought this was another fanfic where the characters' emotions were completely written out or skipped directly. But to be honest, this book gave me a great shock. The emotional drama is very delicate. It is simply a rare gold in the history of Tomato fan fiction.

Regarding the author's literary level, the writing is definitely good, but it seems a bit too depressing, the pace is too long, and the protagonist has no reward after mission after mission, which makes me feel a little sick. This book should be the most stressful protagonist I have ever read on Tomato. The overall score here is 3.5 Stars, which is above medium.

The writing of this book is excellent, the description is delicate and vivid, and the words and sentences are precise and clever, making the scenes and characters come alive on the page. The content is rich and in-depth, and the plot has ups and downs. It is a masterpiece worth savoring.

She has her own ideas, and even the female bishop has come, digging a lot of holes. I am afraid that the author ran away halfway. The change of mentality of the protagonist is very reasonable and not abrupt, but the update speed is not good. The problem is that Tomato readers have adapted to invincible novels. It may be difficult for most people to suddenly have such a weak protagonist. Yes, the fight between Qi Maomao and Fu Hua was too weak, and it might scare some people away, and there was a high probability of a knife behind her. Ai Li felt like she was going to die again, so just in case, I was prepared to run away in advance in case I was knifed (I can't think of how the protagonist will survive at the moment, and I can't understand the hope. I hope the author can grasp the span of his combat power. Come on!)

It's been a long time since I've seen such a honest story about Beng San Yong Jiao. It doesn't just have a simple emotional line. The protagonist doesn't look like a stallion at all, but a living person with his own thoughts. The writing is very delicate and the emotional line is also well written. It deserves five stars [heartfelt]

It's well written. It's a great book. I highly recommend reading it. It just feels a little bit delayed and there is a little too much inner drama. It could be a little more streamlined and the pace faster. Of course, this is just a personal opinion. Anyway, cheers, author. [Blowing kiss]