He Sees My Clamor

I have read some of the writings myself, and I feel that there are really some advantages. The emotional and psychological activities are delicate and real (because the early stage is a microcosm of my own psychology), and it is very close to life. In addition to the protagonist Wang Xiao, the supporting characters are vividly created and have a strong sense of life, especially Li Yunze, Clark, Tang Jinhao and others. But there are also disadvantages. After all, my writing cannot be particularly perfect, but it does not affect the overall look and feel. I can make changes [sending my heart]

(I always feel sorry for not giving it a five-point rating [laughs]) This is a campus furry novel narrated in the first person. After all, if not all of the campus novels in Western Persimmons, it can be said to be only half of them. Although the outlines of many campus novels [face covering] are almost the same, if you actually read them, you will find out. The characteristic of this book now is that it is very personal and has rich interpretations of true feelings. Every character has its own characteristics and meaning when you devote yourself to it. The writing is smooth and natural, the emotions are rich and diverse, and it has a unique style and temperament. (I think it is a bit unsmooth because of the large time span, right? [Thinking]) Chen Tianwang started out as a typical protagonist, with no popularity, no finances, no emotions, and no IQ, so modeling should be better [Thinking] Although he made friends, but within a year he was old again, so he could only rely on the aura of the protagonist to send others to save himself [face covering] I think his emotions are warming up slowly [Thinking] Maybe it will be faster to warm up in a university after college? [Laughing] Take the little wolf away quickly [laughing] I didn't expect klark, what's wrong? The author personally came here just to hold a red line for the old man, and their CP has been tied tightly. The family is not a good one, and only his father is with him. He is also a big anchor, which is probably the author's wish [laughter] Li Xiao, the official Xiaolang cp. His family is broken up, and he doesn't want to hurt others, so he can only live in Xiaolang's house under the guidance of a certain red line. Doesn't he talk a little? [Thinking] The summary is that no one except the protagonist has a good family [smile] So far, the advantages of this book outweigh the disadvantages, and it is worth reading. At the same time, I also hope that the author can produce more exciting content and more exquisite skills. (As expected of a liberal arts sacrifice [smile])

At first I was attracted by the title of the book, but was dissuaded several times by the introduction. Later I made up my mind to read it, and found that it was really good-looking and healing (after all, that's what the title is). I read it carefully for a long time (in my opinion), and I felt that overall it was pretty good, but it also had its pros and cons. For example, when Li Xiao first came in, he said, "You're very beautiful," which was a bit damaging, but it was also the turning point in the book from being boring (foreshadowing) to healing and interesting. So, I like to read it, and update more (currently the update frequency is very good and the number of words is high), I hope it won't be broken. (Don't comment if you don't like it, just my personal thoughts) Come on, author! [Make faces]

For a campus redemption novel written from a first-person perspective that is rarely seen in Red Persimmons, the substitution... May be very impactful, especially the feeling of being ostracized but unwilling to accept it. It feels so uncomfortable to see it, but when you think about it carefully, it is like this. This is the extreme life on campus. Tianwang worked hard to open cracks in the sealed wall, but they were resealed every time until he met that young man who was as bright as light. He would accompany him on trips and discuss common interests with him. He understood him and he (Chen) was also trying to accept him and himself. Hey! But! I think if there are no fresh twists and turns in the plot, this book actually feels very strange, just... Too standard, good writing, good shaping, but there is a feeling that "the book is not long". There are too many campus articles on this platform, and the plots look diverse, but in fact the outlines are the same. This book is very beautiful, the writing style is very solid and delicate, and the future is promising. Now it's time to see how Mr. Ke can make the most of this good article! ٩( 'ω' )و (You are so good at writing about the flavor of life and the feeling of being alive! Teacher Ke seems to be a very interesting person. He is one of the rare people who can help himself to read books!)

The description is delicate, the details are moving, and most importantly, the writing is humane The author really wrote the protagonist's changing mentality, and it was very natural, 🥰

This novel is very immersive to read, sometimes picturesque, the writing is very real, and the writing style is also very good. But sometimes I felt a little nauseous while reading it, because the loneliness and separation from the world written in the novel were so real that it occasionally made me feel uncomfortable. This book is considered a relaxing daily life, right? But it also brings some loneliness and depression... And it's really real...

In the introduction, from Tianwang's vitality that seemed to hold something in his mouth to the sudden revelation of bloody clarity, it was really attractive. There is no need for mythical perseverance or Taoist detachment. A little bit of real repression and a little bit of romantic luck can already capture the same wandering heart.

Campus essays are pretty well written. Give it a five-star support

It's a pretty good article, except for the description in the middle which may be a bit awkward, but it doesn't stop it from being interesting. I love reading it😋

Two-way redemption [laughing] Love, love, love