Reborn as the Ninth Concubine: Protecting My Daughter, Crushing Scum, and Slaying Them All

At present, I feel that the character of Aunt Xue is quite suitable. If Yiping is really her daughter, according to the TV series, he is really good to his own daughters, responds to their requests, and really plans for them. But at the end of each chapter, I sigh about the road ahead or something, or lament that the road ahead is long, it would be enough if I have my daughter, or it has a general meaning of working hard for my daughter's future. It feels like the author has written well and finally finished it. I feel very funny when I sigh there, hahaha. Keep up the good work, author, I'm optimistic about you~🥰

After reading thirty chapters, it feels less like a fanfic and more like "Love... Meng", which provides the author with several character names. Without bringing into the original plot of the TV series and personal personalities, I think it is well written, because in the case of the rebirth of the two girls, it only focuses on describing the events and psychology of the heroine. As the plot goes, it feels like a narration. However, the author does not seem to be good at increasing or decreasing personnel. In the early stage, there were many plots between Erhao and Ruping, and Erhao may be the messenger. ᖰ⌯'▾'⌯ᖳ. I hope the author will pay attention to it when writing articles in the future. It may not be very frequent, but there should be expressions or summaries in a few chapters or so. I have only read thirty chapters, so I may not be able to tell a comprehensive story. I would blindly guess that the author is not good at starting a narrative from the beginning, but is better at the middle stage. Anyway, I feel quite comfortable now. The overall impression is very gentle, including the fact that the heroine is working hard to improve herself and has good intentions. I hope the author will have her own big heroine in the future.

Very good, I like Yiping