National Destiny: Delta Force, Luna's Teammate Turns Into Gale
国运三角洲，变身露娜队友疾风
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- Completed
- Length
- 432k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- English
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Other names
- Delta Force: From the Start, I Transform into Luna's Wife, Jifeng三角洲，开局变身露娜老婆疾风Alternate title on Fanqie
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Both its advantages and disadvantages are quite obvious. The downsides are numerous typos, the national fortune livestream was too clichéd, and the plot was mediocre. The advantages are the Luna and Hayate pairing, and the fact that it doesn't use AI (because there were too many typos, haha). That's why I gave it a high rating, and I hope the author continues to improve.
The plot is commendable, and I particularly enjoyed the Luna and Hayate couple storyline. Although there were many typos and homophones, it clearly showed that the author wrote it themselves, which added a bit of tension and made it more interesting. Overall, it was quite good.
They look great together, and I'm tempted to ship Luna and Hayate as a fanfic couple.
I'd prefer a story with two female leads, even if it's just a lighthearted romance or a story about oranges.
Overall, the plot is decent and quite interesting. And there are also stickers available. Keep it up!
The subject matter is good, and the overall writing is quite good, but there are too many typos, too many typos, too many typos.
It's great! I hope you'll write more about Luna and Hayate...
This is the best Delta novel I've read so far, aside from another fanfiction by the same author.
If you like this kind of genre and are looking for something to read, you can check it out. It's not abstract and not particularly toxic, but it can get boring after a while. The plot follows a predictable formula, so you can guess what happens next. I'm just a casual reader.
Sure, but maybe because of the national fortune, not many people are watching. Those who do watch are probably all Luna fans 😏 The King of Typos.