
After My Dantian Shattered, I Raised a Bunch of Maniacal Disciples
丹田破碎后,我养出一群疯批徒弟
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- Ongoing
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- 456k Words
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- Ancient Romance
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Romance
- Updated
- 9d ago
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- Fanqie
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192Chapters
11.8kReads
8.3Score
1.5kShelves
2.4kListens
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I know why this book has a low rating. Comments are selected according to the highest likes, and the first three are all two or three stars. I guess it's because they happened to see the section about the second apprentice, who was indeed not likable enough. But it's really, really good-looking😍very, very good-looking. I haven't logged in for a long time and specially logged in to comment. The plot concept is very good, the characters are distinct and not stereotyped, the light humor is very smooth to read, and there are many female characters. Several clan kings are women. Many people say they hate the second apprentice, but I think he is a very feminine character. He is extremely talented but always relies on his beauty to climb into bed and study romance novels tirelessly. In my opinion, the heroine regards him more as a tool to complete system tasks, and there is absolutely no ambiguity! The role of a handsome boy is quite new. It is said that the heroine was hurt by him, because the heroine was the favored daughter of heaven and fell and was seriously injured. After being accidentally injured by him, the heroine put a restraint on him. He himself also realized the dangers of pure Yang physique and controlled it. Therefore, the author must love the heroine most and will not let the heroine be abused for no reason! Returning to the creation of the heroine herself, she was also very successful. Her initial exploration of the system, subduing the ghost in the tree, and killing the demon king were all her highlights. Don't miss it if you pass by. Every supporting character setting by this author is very vivid and absolutely not stereotyped. It's really good. You won't lose money if you invest in it. It's worth a try! I feel so sad that such a beautiful and thoughtful book only has 7 points.
It's very interesting. The heroine's character and image are very three-dimensional, but the second and third apprentices are really exhausting. I can only say that they are stupid and bad without knowing it. They only see whether they are good or not and don't care about others at all. The heroine is forced to clean up the mess every day [face covering]. It feels like the heroine gets angry every time she is hurt and angry. She keeps it all in her heart. She is a little bit aggrieved. The heroine is very good.
The protagonist's survival depends purely on luck Too imbecile. . . The protagonist's intelligence is sometimes high and sometimes low. How was it written?
It's quite good-looking. In the southern realm of the lower realm where morality is absent and spiritual energy is thin, everyone wants to advance on the path and engage in intrigues for the sake of cultivation. The high-ranking ones cannibalize the flesh and blood of the lower-ranking ones. Unlike other novels about cultivating immortals, the seedlings with good qualifications are aloof. If they can't grow, they are all used up. There are currently no dramas in which a strong woman is a stronger man than a strong man. The heroine is a disciple of a large sect in the north. She has a lot of knowledge and a tough mind. In addition, the Shenhao system brings spiritual stone rebates to the heroine. The adventure of survival and becoming stronger is very interesting. Three of the five apprentices have appeared, and there is only one male apprentice. Fortunately, he is not too masculine. He is a stupid but very delicate love-minded boy who is very dependent on the heroine (the pure yang body can play a role, right? I cry and call my senior sister hehe)
Although the heroine of this novel is not happy enough and can always be suppressed, she always bounces back naturally and survives. The description shows that the heroine is very smart and reliable, and the core is super powerful. I couldn't read it before because I don't like to read stories where the heroine is too miserable. Now I'm a little obsessed with it. And I found that the core highlight of this novel is that the apprentice's character can't overtake the heroine. The heroine really has a charismatic personality and she will influence others to become powerful people, unlike other master-disciple stories. The heroine lies flat and has a mediocre personality. The apprentice is in a strong state.
It's rare to encounter so many descriptions of female characters. There are good and bad, with different characteristics, and they are all vivid. Who knows that ordinary women are rarely seen in female videos. This book is valuable [OK] and I finally have some brains (I finally don't just click on any interesting article and mark it as a non-female character. The heroine is obviously very weak. OK? I don't ask for a strong woman, but she is a normal person at least@_@)
What a novel novel about immortality. The world of immortality is so big. There must be some means to survive as an immortal. Compared with the salty fish heroines, funny heroines and so on that I have read before. In the early stage, the heroine was able to bend and stretch when she encountered a strong enemy, she was plotted against her, she retaliated directly when she saw an opportunity, she also decisively grabbed a chance to find a way out of a desperate situation, unexpected reversal, and her meticulousness made me crazy. The communication between the system and the heroine is very meaningful. It is different from the regular master-apprentice novel. The supporting characters are well-rounded. Yurou's sentence "If the tea is spilled, will Fu Huaheng blame me?" There is not a lot of words to describe her in the article, but the character is established immediately. She is a very gentle young lady.
It's good to read. Maybe many people avoid the male apprentice, but I think this book is very good because of him. The creator is no longer obsessed with giving the male character a golden body. The male is so emotionally short-sighted and extreme. He fits my core image of a "damp male ghost" very well. Like, the dank male ghosts we usually see have given them too many golden bodies, and given men too many charms that don't exist in them. This is good. I hope he will be infatuated and dedicated to the protagonist and die for love in self-satisfaction, okay? Don't whitewash, don't give charms.
The author's writing is super good. It's an excellent book. The setting is very novel and completely dark. The writing is not bad. I like Yurou, Fu Bao, and Qing Bao very much. The characters are well created. It's not a loss to invest in. But judging from the number of chapters I've read so far, I really can't get used to Song. It gives me a character that has too many things and is stupid. It's hard for him to control his feelings because of his irritability. 80% Of the completely avoidable things that Fu Bao encounters are caused or created by him. He causes more harm than good to Fu Bao. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I've already finished 2/3 of it. I hope this character can be changed or this person can grow in the future.
How come Tomato always has such good articles but low ratings? The rating of this article is really low compared to the quality. I almost missed a good article. Fortunately, I am suspicious by nature. The settings in the early part of the article are very attractive. After reading so many casual novels, this is the first time I have seen the cruel and apocalyptic era of cultivating immortals. The heroine is also very lovable. She is not a virgin, does not hesitate, is very rational, calm and cautious, and has a full personality. The systematic character slightly neutralizes the seriousness in this background, and the whole logic is quite smooth and coherent. It is really good-looking.