A Contract with a Sentinel

The author obviously felt very painful when writing the second half. It's not that the writing is not good, but it feels like it's a bit beyond the author's writing ability. But he worked very hard to write, so it's a bit painful. This whistleblower is very rare. It is rare because it is the first sentence of many whistleblower articles, "The dark moment of the guide, until the dark moment when some control guides and even dark guides appeared." I have always felt that the center of Xiang Shao's articles has always been the conflict between Xiang Shao. The difference is that some articles are written with a lighter emphasis, some are more flattering and one-sided, and some are straightforward but not in-depth. They mainly focus on how to serve the theme of their articles. No matter how serious the conflict is, it will end in "becoming a god", similar to becoming the Queen of the Zerg or remaking the rules and becoming a spiritual leader. The theme of this article is growth, and it is the growth of ordinary guides who have no golden fingers in the dark period and need to shed all their flesh and blood. The growth of ordinary guides who are not enough brains but work hard. As a time traveler, the heroine only sowed seeds, but she got stuck in the mud, and eventually her spirit and body were torn apart in various ways. Finally, she was pulled out of the ground by her friends and sprouted. The author did not write down the details of whether the sapling grew into a big tree or withered, leaving an open ending. Very good In many aspects of the content, I personally feel that the writing is cruel but not cruel enough, and the heroine's character is really twisted. I don't mean to hate it, but the writing is very good, but such a character is not lovable in Tomato and may lack some readers. This is not the intention of asking the author to change the character! (Strengthen your armor!) I really like the heroine, but this article is not suitable for the market. It's a pity that it didn't get the results it deserved. The writing in the second half of the article is a bit lacking, and some aspects are not handled very well, but overall the flaws do not hide the good points. It is a good article! Recommend! Complaining more is also a reminder. If you read this article and then read other Xiangshao articles, you may become a little picky. Because in some sentry articles, the guides were on the wrong side because the guides did not respect the sentries enough, which deepened the conflicts between each other. Moreover, many guides rejected purification and chose to become control guides. However, the heroine did not understand other guides' dislike of the sentries because the gold finger was painless and even stroking all kinds of fur was very enjoyable. After reading this article, if you look at this setting, you will easily feel that the female protagonist is a loser, and that the other guides have become the female comparison group. If you like Mary Sue Wizard-themed articles, read this article carefully, otherwise the filter used to read the article will easily break.

This is a pseudo-heartthrob story. All love and flattery are poison wrapped in honey, but it is a good story worth reading. The guide's resistance in the face of unfair circumstances, the friendship between the Su family sisters, and the heroine's own growth and transformation shine like gems in the dark and desperate background.

I thought of that sentence again. If they are enemies, it is a blood feud. Just look at history. How many guides have been destroyed. Even if they seem to be given some freedom now, it is just a pet like a bird in a cage in the palm of their hand. To be honest, the male protagonist here is not an ordinary romance novel. He has created a perfect male protagonist image. To be honest, there are really not many qualified male protagonists here. I think this should be a non-CP novel. I hope that the heroine and her sisters can finally work hard to support the guide and fight for freedom and liberation, instead of just another love interest? Some of the problems and realities in it are sometimes similar, but they are just sharper and more concrete, embodying some invisible values. For example, the value of purification to sentinels

It turns out that I don't hate abuse, I just hate irrational abuse. This book is very good. Although the heroine seems to be taken advantage of by everyone at the moment, she doesn't rely on emotions to live. When she is hurt, she can simply get away if she sees people clearly. To put it bluntly, I don't hate being surrounded by villains, I just don't like that most heroines forget their pain easily and choose to make do with it. The heroine of this book is very good, she can be moved, has a long memory, and has her own safety in mind, not just feelings.

It is a book that I like very much so far. The heroine travels through time, but there is no golden finger (but it will change from a D-level guide to a B-level guide for unknown reasons). It has the memory of modern society and hopes to live a stable life. The plot is also very good, with exciting pulls and direct conflicts between the guide and the sentry. No one is perfect, and each sentry is like a "noble man" in real society (sarcastic meaning, some well-educated men can pretend to be gentlemen, and I am talking about those LJs who have no strength but are trustworthy). Every sentinel will make me firmly believe in the author's strength. I am currently looking forward to the next arrangement of Da Da Da [Please update] [I haven't seen enough]

The writing is good. The world in the book is perverted, but very realistic. I felt depressing after reading it. The whole society is in a vicious cycle, not only due to external factors, but also internal struggles. The world is unequal, but it is extremely unequal and does not even have superficial equality. Class solidification is obvious...

After thinking about it, I decided to give it five stars to encourage the author. It is really inspiring. I hope you will create more stories in the future [Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Then I don't know if the author will review the story. I can definitely see that there is no outline. The subsequent plot is written wherever I think of it, making it unclear what the main plot is. A heartthrob? But none of the male guests have love. Is it revenge? But the heroine has no intention of revenge. To become stronger? But the heroine has not become stronger. Are you changing the world with your sisters? But the author didn't write about it. From the first chapter to the last chapter, the shortcomings are actually very obvious, that is, the heroine has not changed, or the various characters have not changed significantly, the male sentries have no regrets, the guides and supporting characters are not awake, the alien fusion has no sequel, and the ending will be the same regardless of the sisters appearing, including Su Tian, ​​who ended up as a rebel. Not to mention that there was an amnesia in the middle that caused the progress to be cleared. Sometimes I feel that the author loves the heroine very much and is willing to describe her various emotions and struggles. But sometimes I feel that the author doesn't love the heroine and insists on using the heroine's mistakes to advance the plot, leaving the heroine to suffer the consequences. But I am still willing to give it five stars. How to write a good story can be learned, but writing a good story requires talent. The author is really talented in writing multiple settings and complex world views. Come on, come on, come on.

The plot is particularly majestic and grand, written from a novel perspective. It's hard to say, it sucked.

The angle of this article is very novel. The guides I read before were very relaxed in soothing their spirits. I didn't understand why many guides were grumpy, but now I understand. I really wish all the sentinels didn't like me and wouldn't come to me for purification [face covering]

The writing is realistic. I have also read other guides' articles and I think they are too otome-oriented. If it were in reality, it might not be so beautiful. The author has written about the conflicts that may occur between the guide and the sentinel.