Football: As Messi and Ronaldo Fade, a New King Is Crowned

It's a very well-written football novel, quite different from traditional system-based football novels, with the protagonist undergoing a significant growth process. Personally, I feel the differences from other system-based football novels are: 1. There's no stat panel, allowing the protagonist's abilities to have a certain range of variation and room for improvement.

It's a great read, well-written, and satisfyingly exciting. The protagonist's rise to stardom after joining the first team is incredibly exhilarating; he single-handedly reversed Manchester United's decline and carried them to new heights. It's very enjoyable to read, and the overall power level isn't low. Keep it up, more frequent updates will make it even more exciting... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Fine and delicate descriptions It has the typical thrills of a football novel, the joy of scoring a goal, and detailed descriptions of everyday life. However, the slice-of-life scenes make up a large portion of the story, currently feeling like they're approaching 30%.

It's rare to find a football novel with such nuanced descriptions of off-field events. The solid football-related content is a fundamental element of football fiction, but what sets it apart from other novels of the same genre is the abundance of detailed off-field descriptions.

This is great! A really good football novel. This system novel is a bit different; it doesn't have specific numerical values, leaving room for imagination. Although the protagonist progresses a bit too quickly—it feels like he could be crowned king in just one season—it's so satisfying, hahaha!

I've read up to chapter 17 so far, and overall it's pretty good. The descriptions of the matches are also quite good. However, could you please reduce the amount of dialogue between the female lead (the protagonist's online game is described in so much detail, and it's referred to as "she," so she's basically the female lead) and the protagonist? I think two or three paragraphs would be enough.

It can be written in a very passionate way.

I've only read up to chapter 29 so far, and haven't read the rest yet, but I wanted to give it a rating first—it's really good. I hope the author continues writing.

It's beautiful and very pleasing to the eye.

It's great! Please give it a happy ending, thank you.