One Piece: the Straw Hat Vice-President, but Became a Sea Succubus

The heroine is Nami, and the relationship scene is pretty good. The relationship established after the Drum Island chapter, and the little sweetness between Nami and Nami later on is good. When Nami asked Robin, she avoided wondering if there would be a development trend of having more girls [laughs]

This book is very well written. The characters are in line with the characters. The emotional scenes are natural. The fights are very graphic. The tacit understanding with the protagonist team is very good. It is not inconsistent. The ratio of emotional daily life and adventure fights is very suitable. It does not look monotonous. I really like the fights and emotional scenes written by the author. As a normal and systematic male time traveler, I will think of beauties [grieved], so I hope there will be more female protagonists. I will definitely follow Funaguru Nami Robin. The second one is Hancock, the most beautiful woman. This should be enough. If not, add Yamato [Cool] I don't like stories where the girl is given away and the male protagonist is a eunuch. So far, it's still very interesting. The back part doesn't look good [grievance] The AI feels too heavy

It's really good to read. It feels like I was just chasing pirates. The protagonist has perfectly integrated into the Straw Hat Pirates. The only flaw is that I discovered this book too early and that's it. I hope that the next climax of Aaron can be written better and more emotional scenes with Nami can be written. I think it is very interesting.

It feels like the best Pirates fanfic out there. Who has multiple heroines? Right now it's just Nami and Robin, won't Hancock accept them? In other words, two heroines means multiple heroines. I have been following the update for so long, so I won't have any regrets [I'm about to cry] Still no Hancock, which is a pity. It's a bit sad that this is the end of the book. Overall it's pretty good. It's one of the few good-looking One Piece books in Tomato.

It's good, but not enough to watch. I was expecting no heroine, but depending on the situation, the heroine will be Nami, and a single heroine is okay (although it's not easy to complain about). I reluctantly accept it, and don't want more. The harem is too much, the multiple heroines are too ambiguous, and I dare to give it one star.

A good pirate fanfic, is there a female protagonist? Very nice!

This pirate fanfic is quite surprising [like][like]

Everything changes, but nothing changes

It's very interesting, the plot is well handled, and some minor flaws can be ignored. However, since there are multiple women, why not have an empress? Wang Lufei, a single-celled creature, can't handle it.

The only pirate fan, my favorite

When I saw Bucky, I wanted to say something about it, that is, there are many problems with the ship. Even monster grabbing (´_ゝ｀) cannot be said to be a problem. The main reason is that in One Piece, the king vs. King and general is very obvious, so some people don't like the crew grabbing monsters (including me, I can watch it but don't like it very much). The author, I would like to give you a suggestion. The ninjutsu you purchased is not too expensive to write. This way it will not be too laggy and will be smoother. After all, if the combat power card is too strong, the writing will be dead.

The protagonist has invaded the impel city, why not kill those prisoners who can't resist on the sixth floor? There are not many valuable goals in them, but a lot of points [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Looks good, more updates, no rest allowed [laughter] The plots I've seen so far are very interesting, and the characters' emotions are quite full, especially the interaction between the protagonist and his companions, and doing justice in a pirate style are very interesting. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you [Like] [Laughing]

It basically follows the original plot, but has been modified with some magic, and it looks great.

It's good-looking, organized, not brainless, well-written, and I love reading it. I hope I won't stop updating this time. I really like it this time

Do you think this book looks like an AI novel?

If the friendship in the hot-blooded drama is mixed with sticky affection, the flavor will change. This is why the original work does not develop love, at least it does not emphasize and highlight love too much. The hot-blooded series is like the sun at noon, bright and dazzling and full of masculinity, while the love series is like the morning and evening sun, warm but with a certain degree of femininity.

AI writing, some traces are more obvious, there are many small flaws, but no major ones. Overall, the writing is okay. If you are short of books, you can give it a try.

It's okay. Bonus points for having multiple girls, Nami and Robin. I thought the Empress was stable when it came to the Draconians, but there were no points deducted. The writing and pacing were okay. It's better to watch the anime for extra points. Nami cried when teammates encountered something, which detracted points. She's not that fragile, and there are some original settings. Be sure to pay attention to the fact that Nami didn't have long hair two years ago, Zoro had two eyes, and the Fire Release didn't have A level. The reincarnation eye cannot be turned off and there is a high probability that it won't be conceived in two years. It is still recommended to read it twice more whether you are half-AI or hand-written. It's almost four stars.

A rare Nami heroine, I hope she is the only heroine

Fortunately, what is written at the top is too taken for granted. There is no way the Warring States Period will let Whitebeard go. It's useless even if you have red hair. Otherwise, this war will be useless. It's best if Ace rescues Whitebeard and dies.

It's so rare to follow the ship. It feels like I'm re-walking the same path I came from. My childhood memories have awakened for me. At that time, I really imagined myself as a certain profession and following the Straw Hats on adventures. Now when I watch One Piece, it feels like I'm just completing a mission. I want to put an end to my childhood, but I don't know if I can see the end of it.

The one less star is because this book really likes to kill people, including some of the main characters.

It's great to follow the boat. Come on, I hope there won't be a female protagonist [star]

Very good. I wonder if we can add the Empress and Baby5 to Sanji's wife. I'm very curious. I'm very curious about Sanji's mentality if he knows that his wife was abducted by the male protagonist [laughing] [laughing] and then add Fan's sister abducted. I think Sanji may still have a certain obsession with dancing. I hope the author can add these four people [Adoration] [Adoration]

The description of the fight is really good and feels very smooth. The personalities of each character have not collapsed either. I've been following it, it's very good.

Very good. I have a suggestion. Since there is a female protagonist, there must be a love line. Reducing it is not good. And I feel that the female protagonist can take Robin and the empress. The male protagonist is quite charming. I will give you two small gifts. After reading Chapter 138, I found that there are not many comments in the book, but the author has indeed made some progress. When fighting Enero, there were no enemies who fought against Luffy, and many people did not fight the corresponding ones. This is still very good. I have seen a lot of ship-traveling. On the surface, they are following Luffy, and then the protagonists are crew members, but in reality, you will find that the protagonist is grabbing monsters all the way, and is invincible. You are like Luffy or Zoro. , There is no plot at all, just soy sauce, this book is good, this kind of boat flow is better, but can Robin accept it? 🌚, I feel it's time, to prevent Nami from being seen by a transparent person, then Robin has to take it too🌚

It looks good, the heroines are Nami, Robin, Shirahoshi, and Hiyori Just didn't kill Momonosuke And Clay went there, where is a crow as big as me? The nutritional content in history is extremely high. I'm so full.

I feel like I can definitely buy a Celestial Body. It costs tens of thousands. At least it is enough for the intermediate level. Otherwise, the chakra and physical strength will be too much and it will not be enough. If you have a Celestial Body, even if you fight like Akainu and Aoki for ten days, you can still fight for several days. After all, the pirate's physique is many times stronger than Naruto.

Yes, it's really good-looking, and it makes up for some of the regrets in the original work. I hope the author can think about the battle on Beehive Island carefully. We are anxious to read it, so we can write it slowly this time, but please be sure to write this key battle well (when can the Deserter King die and realize his dream?) [Sneaky laugh]