League of Legends: I Just Want to Win a Prize!

Some paragraphs are too long. Internet novels are different from prose. There is no need to pile up long sentences or large paragraphs. The rhythm should be loose and there should be enough white space so that readers can have a sense of immersion when reading. It's not good-looking. The protagonist's abilities are mixed but not refined. He sprays fireballs from beginning to end, and his teammates don't praise him even though he uses a one-time ultimate move. Instead, they are surprised that the protagonist ate too much after the war. Can you give it some emotional value? There are too many associations, and some chapters have more associations than the number of words in the plot.

It's a bit overwhelming

It can also be used to suppress combat power. Don't be stubborn, author. Look at the comments and see how many people are saying that you are suppressing combat power. The purpose of giving experience cards is to suppress combat power. Otherwise, what's the use?

The author wrote it carefully. The background of the story, regional characteristics, and the props in strange and different worlds were very interesting. I read it without skipping a word. I hope to work hard, continue to work hard, and maintain the standard.

How can I put it, this novel gave me a very good feeling when reading it. Maybe it's a matter of my personal hobbies. Although the protagonist also has some problems, it's generally harmless. I've read other League of Legends novels, and the author gave me the feeling that it's a bit like Qidian's style of painting, but it doesn't feel quite like it. Overall, it's not that big of a deal. I also like the style of this novel, and the jokes in it are also very good. It's just right now. What I want to say is that the author should work hard and finish it. If I can't see the end of this novel, I will definitely be included in the news tomorrow.

It's good, but some paragraphs are a bit long

It's okay, a bit toxic, but still watchable. But after reading it for a few days, I only have one feeling: I haven't finished it yet and will make up for it tomorrow [laughs][laughs][laughs]

I like that the protagonist gradually becomes stronger. Some people say that he is overpowered in combat, but I think the talent of the protagonist is really a bit cheated (I have read the Naruto manga so I know what the difficulty is, and he has already had two ability systems in such a short time since he came to this world). The protagonist is an ordinary person from the beginning, and his personality is well described. Please don't compare ordinary people with those cheating shounen manga protagonists. The inner world, daily life and background story are all well done. It is a real world that leaves us with a lot of fun and a better understanding of the characters. At least this book is not a mindless and invincible novel at first glance. I personally like this type of book I mean, can there be more skills and tactics in combat? Otherwise, it feels a bit repetitive. Don't let your favorability rise too quickly, give it time and pave the way. The favorability of some books rose too quickly, and I wasn't used to those irrational emotional scenes. Don't have a harem just for the sake of having a harem (the most annoying thing). Personally, I feel that emotions are the characters and the soul of the book. If the characters are no longer reasonable, then the book can be stopped because there is no need to read a false story. For some deliberate things, like those plots made just for the sake of memes, you will understand if you inform them first. I personally am a rationalist. It really makes me feel sick to see a mindless plot.

The combat effectiveness is a bit suppressed, but it's not too serious. The author should have corrected it. However, the system's cooldown time is too long after pulling out a useless thing, which is really unsustainable. The rest of the story feels pretty good, and it can be seen that the author has carefully researched various background stories and timelines.

How to lock it! Emmm, it suits my taste. At least it's funny and not embarrassing. You can watch more updates.